List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Yes all”应为“Yes, always”，以及时态不一致。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list to remember the ingredients I need, which helps me prepare my meals more efficiently.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议加强语法基础，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并明确说明原因。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before work, but it doesn't always work efficiently because unexpected tasks or changes can affect my plan.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免口语化表达，并提供更具体的理由。

예시: Maybe some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility at work, while others find lists help them organize their tasks more clearly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，部分内容难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的表达方式，并避免无意义的词汇。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my plans and set reminders.

× I always created a shopping list so I can remember ingredients I need and I always use it to prepare my meals more efficiently.

✓ I always create a shopping list so I can remember the ingredients I need and I always use it to prepare my meals more efficiently.

句子中使用了过去时态“created”，但句意表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“create”。

× I always created a shopping list so I can remember ingredients I need and I always use it to prepare my meals more efficiently.

✓ I always create a shopping list so I can remember the ingredients I need and I always use it to prepare my meals more efficiently.

“ingredients”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是特定的食材。

× Yes, I always make A to do list before going to work, but it's not always work efficiently because except tax or change will affect my plan.

✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list before going to work, but it doesn't always work efficiently because unexpected tasks or changes affect my plan.

“A to do list”中“to do list”应连写为“to-do list”，且首字母小写。

× Yes, I always make A to do list before going to work, but it's not always work efficiently because except tax or change will affect my plan.

✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list before going to work, but it doesn't always work efficiently because unexpected tasks or changes affect my plan.

“it's not always work”中“work”应使用第三人称单数形式“works”，但更自然的表达是“doesn't always work”。

× Yes, I always make A to do list before going to work, but it's not always work efficiently because except tax or change will affect my plan.

✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list before going to work, but it doesn't always work efficiently because unexpected tasks or changes affect my plan.

“except tax or change”表达不清，应改为“unexpected tasks or changes”更符合语境。

× Maybe some people's personality are different.

✓ Maybe some people's personalities are different.

“personality”应使用复数形式“personalities”，因为主语是复数“some people”。

× Maybe some people's personality are different.

✓ Maybe some people's personalities are different.

“are”与复数主语“personalities”一致，原句中主谓不一致。

× Some people want to make their work more clearly.

✓ Some people want to make their work clearer.

“clearly”是副词，修饰动词；这里应使用形容词“clearer”修饰名词“work”。

× I always write down my plan on my phone because I always take my phone so I can remember it and I can make a now Click to notice me to remember supply.

✓ I always write down my plan on my phone because I always take my phone with me so I can remember it, and I can set a new click notification to remind me to buy supplies.

“take my phone”后应加介词“with me”；“make a now Click to notice me to remember supply”表达不清，改为“set a new click notification to remind me to buy supplies”更准确。