List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိစေရန် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုတိကျစွာ အသုံးပြုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "it keep me remind me" ဆိုသောနေရာတွင် သင်၏စကားလုံးရွေးချယ်မှုကို တိကျစွာပြင်ဆင်ရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုချုပ်ဆိုပြီး အကြောင်းအရာကို ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစေရန် ကြိုးစားပါ။

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, so I didn't forget anything important.

제안: သင်၏အဖြေသည် ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းပြီး စာလုံးပေါင်းနှင့် စကားလုံးအသုံးအနှုန်းများကို မှန်ကန်စေရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ စကားလုံးများ မပြည့်စုံခြင်းနှင့် အကြောင်းအရာ မရှင်းလင်းခြင်းကြောင့် နားလည်ရခက်ခဲသည်။ ထို့ကြောင့် စကားလုံးများကို ပြန်လည်စစ်ဆေးပြီး ပိုမိုတိကျသော အကြောင်းအရာများဖြင့် ဖြည့်စွက်ပါ။

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. Sometimes I have many tasks, so the list helps me remember what to do next and prevents me from getting confused.

제안: သင်၏အဖြေတွင် စကားလုံးရွေးချယ်မှုနှင့် စာလုံးပေါင်းအမှားများရှိသည်။ "making leaves" ဆိုသည်မှာ မှားယွင်းသောစကားလုံးဖြစ်ပြီး "making lists" ဟု ပြင်ဆင်သင့်သည်။ ထို့အပြင် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုတိကျစွာ အသုံးပြု၍ အကြောင်းအရာကို ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစေရန် ကြိုးစားပါ။

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. However, I believe that making a list actually saves time by helping you plan your tasks efficiently.

제안: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး အကြောင်းအရာကို ရှင်းလင်းစွာ ဖော်ပြထားသည်။ သို့သော် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုတိကျစွာ အသုံးပြု၍ စကားလုံးပေါင်းအမှားများကို လျော့နည်းစေရန် ကြိုးစားပါ။

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's more convenient than paper since I don't have to worry about forgetting or losing the list.

× Before going on shopping I usually make a list of things that I need to get because sometimes you know, we forget things.

✓ Before going shopping, I usually make a list of things that I need to get because sometimes, you know, we forget things.

The phrase 'going on shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'going shopping' without the preposition 'on'. This is because 'go' is followed directly by the verb in -ing form to indicate an activity. In Myanmar, this is similar to using the verb directly after 'go' to express an action.

× So making lists is very helpful for me because it keep me remind me what thing did I need to get.

✓ So making lists is very helpful for me because it keeps me reminded of what things I need to get.

The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'remind me what thing did I need to get' is incorrect; it should be 'reminded of what things I need to get'. In Myanmar, verb agreement and correct verb forms are important to convey the right meaning.

× Sure, making list for my work really helped me a lot because I can.

✓ Sure, making lists for my work really helped me a lot because I can.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of multiple tasks. In Myanmar, quantifiers and plural forms are used to indicate quantity clearly.

× Sometimes I forgot things like and sometimes I lost track like after completing one time I don't know what to do.

✓ Sometimes I forget things, and sometimes I lose track; after completing one task, I don't know what to do.

The verbs 'forgot' and 'lost' should be in present tense 'forget' and 'lose' to match the present context. Also, 'one time' should be 'one task'. In Myanmar, tense consistency is important to maintain clarity.

× Sometime I have many tasks to do and I'm lost what to do. Start fast and by making leave.

✓ Sometimes I have many tasks to do, and I get lost about what to do next. I start fast and by making a list, I can manage better.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I'm lost what to do' should be 'I get lost about what to do next'. 'Start fast and by making leave' is unclear; it should be 'I start fast and by making a list, I can manage better'. In Myanmar, clear sentence structure helps in understanding.

× I think some people don't like because they think that it's time consuming, but actually, uh, when you have a habit of making leaves, it is much more you can say that, umm, time saving because if you make a list, do what to do tomorrow, uh, then you save a lot of time.

✓ I think some people don't like it because they think that it's time-consuming, but actually, when you have a habit of making lists, it is much more, you can say, time-saving because if you make a list of what to do tomorrow, then you save a lot of time.

The pronoun 'like' needs an object 'it'. 'Making leaves' should be 'making lists'. Also, 'do what to do tomorrow' should be 'make a list of what to do tomorrow'. In Myanmar, correct pronoun use and noun choice are essential for clarity.

× I prefer making this on my phone because I carry my phone all the time whatever I go and whatever I do anything.

✓ I prefer making this on my phone because I carry my phone all the time wherever I go and whatever I do.

The phrase 'whatever I go' is incorrect; it should be 'wherever I go'. In Myanmar, correct prepositions are important to express location and conditions properly.

× If I write on the paper it I will have to carry the these things all the time with me which is not possible.

✓ If I write on paper, I will have to carry these things all the time with me, which is not possible.

The sentence has extra words 'it' and 'the' before 'these things'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'. In Myanmar, avoiding unnecessary words helps in making sentences clear.