List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors, such as "I also find it very I also find that". To improve, try to avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, using linking words like "because" or "so" can make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I always make a list on my phone using a tracking app because it helps me stay organised and avoid impulse buying, so I can keep to my budget effectively.

제안: Your answer provides good detail but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "This as a timer as well" and repeated phrases like "I'm able to I'm able to". To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Also, try to use linking words like "which" or "so that" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work using a tracking app, which also functions as a timer, so I can assign specific tasks to set times and receive reminders. This helps me stay organised, and I find it very fulfilling to complete each task.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some errors, such as "checking the lease rather than getting the tax done" which seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. Also, the sentence structure could be improved for clarity. Try to use linking words like "because" and "while" correctly and avoid confusing phrases.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to spend that time completing tasks. Others find lists distracting since they keep checking them instead of focusing on their work.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but the ending "And so yeah" is informal and could be replaced with a more formal conclusion. Also, try to use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy such as "edit them or reorganize my task or my workload"; choose one clear phrase.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is usually with me, making it easily accessible and convenient. This way, I can quickly edit or reorganise my tasks whenever necessary, so I find it more efficient than using paper.

× I also find it very I also find that it helps me to avoid impulse buying and it's useful to help me stay on track and keep to my budget.

✓ I also find that it helps me to avoid impulse buying and it's useful to help me stay on track and keep to my budget.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'I also find it very' which is redundant and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing the repeated phrase corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× This as a timer as well, so I can put specific tasks.

✓ This has a timer as well, so I can assign specific tasks.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'has' which is necessary to indicate possession. Also, 'put specific tasks' is awkward; 'assign specific tasks' is more appropriate. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I can allot specific tasks for a specific time and I'm able to I'm able to constantly receive reminders about when I should be working on what task.

✓ I can allot specific tasks for a specific time and I'm able to constantly receive reminders about when I should be working on each task.

The phrase 'I'm able to I'm able to' is repeated unnecessarily, which is a sentence structure error. Also, 'what task' is better replaced with 'each task' for clarity. Removing repetition and improving word choice corrects the sentence.

× While some people do not also like making a list because they find it very distracting.

✓ Some people also do not like making a list because they find it very distracting.

The placement of 'also' is incorrect in the original sentence, causing awkwardness. Moving 'also' to follow 'people' improves the sentence flow and clarity.

× They are constantly checking the lease rather than getting the tax done.

✓ They are constantly checking the list rather than getting the task done.

The words 'lease' and 'tax' are incorrect in this context and appear to be typographical errors. The correct words are 'list' and 'task' respectively, which fit the context of making and following lists.