List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying "it helps me to get more organized and it helps me not to buy stuff that I don't need," you can say "because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary items."

예시: Yes, I often make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid unclear phrases like "tours workouts." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. For example, you can say "Yes, I often make lists for my tasks, such as workout routines, because they help me stay organized and save time."

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my tasks, such as workout routines, because they help me stay organized and save time.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and could be more polite and natural. Instead of saying "it comes from laziness," you can say "some people may find it time-consuming or unnecessary." Also, correct grammar like "not trying to put in more effort."

예시: I think some people may not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary, and they may not want to put in extra effort.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I don't mind either, but I find making lists on my phone easier because typing is faster. On the other hand, making lists on paper requires tools like pens and paper, which can be inconvenient."

예시: I don't mind either, but I find making lists on my phone easier because typing is faster. On the other hand, making lists on paper requires tools like pens and paper, which can be inconvenient.

× I wouldn't say the exact reason because I'm not one of those people, but I feel like it comes from laziness and not trying to do put more efforts.

✓ I wouldn't say the exact reason because I'm not one of those people, but I feel like it comes from laziness and not trying to put in more effort.

The phrase 'trying to do put more efforts' is incorrect because 'do' is unnecessary and 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' when used in this context. The correct form is 'trying to put in more effort'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.