List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和冗长，使用更准确的词汇表达自己的观点。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy wandering around the supermarket and discovering different products. While I shop, I think about what I need, so I prefer to decide on the spot.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确说明做清单的目的和效果，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I make a rough list for my work. It helps me remember the tasks I need to complete each day. This way, I can organize my time better and reduce my anxiety.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达重复且不够具体。建议用更准确的语法表达原因，并提供具体的例子或解释。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel stressed when they see many tasks they haven't completed. Also, they might prefer to be spontaneous rather than planning everything.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子，明确表达偏好并说明原因，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me think more clearly. Compared to typing on my phone, it feels more effective for organizing my tasks.

× Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I liked wandering in the supermarket so that I can look any kind of many kind of good products and I will working and while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

✓ Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I like wandering in the supermarket so that I can look at many kinds of good products and I will work while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

这里的动词时态错误，原句中使用了过去时态"liked"，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"like"。另外，"look any kind of many kind of good products"表达不清，应改为"look at many kinds of good products"。"will working"应改为"will work"，因为"will"后接动词原形。

× Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I liked wandering in the supermarket so that I can look any kind of many kind of good products and I will working and while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

✓ Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I like wandering in the supermarket so that I can look at many kinds of good products and I will work while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

"while thinking about what I need"中"thinking"用法正确，表示同时进行的动作。

× Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I liked wandering in the supermarket so that I can look any kind of many kind of good products and I will working and while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

✓ Actually I don't make a list when I shop because I like wandering in the supermarket so that I can look at many kinds of good products and I will work while thinking about what I need, so I will not make a list initially.

"look any kind of many kind of good products"中缺少介词"at"，正确表达应为"look at many kinds of good products"。

× Yes I will make this for my work but it's just rough. I'll just write down something I need to do today so I will know what I should do in the following times and it will be more specific thing I should. I can know what I should do. I will if I relax my anxiety.

✓ Yes, I will make this for my work but it's just rough. I'll just write down something I need to do today so I will know what I should do in the following times and it will be a more specific thing I should do. I can know what I should do. I will if I relax my anxiety.

"more specific thing I should"缺少动词"do"，应补充完整。"I will if I relax my anxiety"句子不完整，建议补充动词或重组句子。

× Maybe they think make a list will make them feel stressful because he will thought about a lot of things to do and he haven't done it. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they are just don't like planning.

✓ Maybe they think making a list will make them feel stressed because they will think about a lot of things to do and they haven't done them. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they just don't like planning.

原句中代词使用不一致，前面用"they"，后面却用"he"，应保持一致。"he will thought"时态错误，应为"they will think"。"he haven't done it"主谓不一致，应为"they haven't done them"。

× Maybe they think make a list will make them feel stressful because he will thought about a lot of things to do and he haven't done it. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they are just don't like planning.

✓ Maybe they think making a list will make them feel stressed because they will think about a lot of things to do and they haven't done them. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they just don't like planning.

"think make a list"中"make"应改为动名词形式"making"，表示动作的名词化。

× Maybe they think make a list will make them feel stressful because he will thought about a lot of things to do and he haven't done it. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they are just don't like planning.

✓ Maybe they think making a list will make them feel stressed because they will think about a lot of things to do and they haven't done them. So maybe they will feel stress and anxiety and maybe they just don't like planning.

"feel stressful"应改为"feel stressed"，因为"stressed"是形容人的感受，"stressful"是形容事物令人感到压力。

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper because I like write down what I need to do and I think right now will help me think more instead of typing in the phone and it will help me think more about what I should do and it's more helpful for me.

✓ Actually I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to write down what I need to do and I think writing it down will help me think more instead of typing on the phone and it will help me think more about what I should do and it's more helpful for me.

"like write down"缺少不定式"to"，应为"like to write down"。"right now will help me"表达不清，改为"writing it down will help me"更准确。"typing in the phone"应为"typing on the phone"，介词使用错误。