List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りを修正し、より自然な表現を使うことが重要です。また、答えをもう少し具体的にして、なぜリストを作るのか理由を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: 答えは比較的明確ですが、文のつながりをスムーズにするために接続詞を使い、より自然な表現にすると良いです。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it works very well because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I organize a training session, I am always well prepared and complete all necessary tasks.

제안: 質問の意味が理解できなかったことを伝える際は、丁寧に言い換え、質問の内容を確認する表現を使いましょう。

예시: I'm sorry, I didn't quite understand the question. Could you please repeat or explain it again?

제안: 答えが不明瞭で混乱しています。質問に対して明確にどちらを好むか答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them, but sometimes I use paper if I want to write quickly.

× When I buy it at supermarket, I usually prepare the list of what I want to buy.

✓ When I buy it at the supermarket, I usually prepare a list of what I want to buy.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'supermarket' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' because it is the first mention and not a specific list already known.

× When I buy it at supermarket, I usually prepare the list of what I want to buy.

✓ When I buy it at the supermarket, I usually prepare a list of what I want to buy.

同上。

× Yes, I always make a list for my work. It works very well. For example, when I organize a training session I'm always prepared for, I do what I should do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. It works very well. For example, when I organize a training session, I'm always prepared and do what I should do.

The sentence is slightly awkward; adding a comma after 'training session' improves clarity. Also, 'I'm always prepared for' is incomplete; it should be 'I'm always prepared and do what I should do' to complete the thought.

× Sorry I don't know what you say because I always make list and I don't know what fight I they.

✓ Sorry, I don't understand what you are saying because I always make lists and I don't know what you mean.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' (plural). 'I don't know what fight I they' is nonsensical; it should be replaced with 'I don't know what you mean' to convey the intended meaning.

× I was I prefer both, sorry.

✓ I prefer both, sorry.

The phrase 'I was I prefer both' is incorrect. The past tense 'was' is unnecessary here because the speaker is expressing a present preference. Removing 'was' corrects the sentence.

× I usually prefer to make ample at least post on paper or on my phone and because I oh, sorry, that's enough.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list either on paper or on my phone, because I find both useful. Oh, sorry, that's enough.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make ample at least post' is incorrect and confusing. Rewriting the sentence to clearly express the preference for making lists on paper or phone improves clarity and grammatical correctness.