List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repeated words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the groceries I need. This way, I can save time and avoid forgetting important items.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain with supporting details using proper sentence structure. Avoid repeating words and make your answer more coherent with linking words.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list of my daily tasks. In the morning, I plan what work I can do, and in the evening, I review the tasks I have completed.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammatical mistakes. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas better.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way to organise their tasks. Moreover, some feel that lists create unnecessary pressure by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me wherever I go. This makes it easy to check and update my lists anytime.

× Yes, I easily make a list when I go to shopping because it help me remember that what groceries I usually I need to buy, buy.

✓ Yes, I easily make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember which groceries I usually need to buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' using the verb + -ing form without 'to'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The repeated 'buy' is unnecessary and removed. The phrase 'that what groceries' is awkward; 'which groceries' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I easily make a list when I go to shopping because it help me remember that what groceries I usually I need to buy, buy.

✓ Yes, I easily make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember which groceries I usually need to buy.

The verb 'help' must be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I usually make a list of daily daily work. In the morning what I can do and in the evening what type of work I can do I usually.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of daily work. In the morning, I note what I can do, and in the evening, what type of work I can do.

The sentence structure is awkward and repetitive. 'Daily daily work' is redundant; 'daily work' suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and natural flow.

× Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way to organise their tasks. Also, some feel that list create unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly remind them of unfinished world.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way to organise their tasks. Also, some feel that lists create unnecessary pressure or stress by constantly reminding them of unfinished work.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some'. 'Remind' should be 'reminding' to match the gerund form after 'by'. 'World' is incorrect; the intended word is 'work'.

× I prefer to make a list on mobile phone because I I usually use to mobile phone and carry to ourselves whenever I go to another place and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I usually use my mobile phone and carry it with me whenever I go to another place.

The pronouns are incorrect and redundant. 'I I' is repeated. 'Use to mobile phone' should be 'use my mobile phone'. 'Carry to ourselves' is incorrect; it should be 'carry it with me'. The sentence is completed for clarity.