List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“I'm the kind of people”应为“I'm the kind of person”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Writing down what I need helps me remember and ensures I don't miss anything when I shop.

제안: 回答中有重复表达“reduce my stress about work”，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复。可以增加具体细节说明计划如何帮助学习。

예시: Yes, I make plans on my phone when studying because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. This way, I know exactly what tasks to complete each day, which reduces my stress.

제안: 句子结构不够准确，如“they born with good memory”应为“they are born with a good memory”。建议使用更自然的表达，并丰富内容，说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally. They might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有口语填充词“uh”和“umm”，建议减少使用。可以用更正式的表达替代“super convenient”，并简化句子结构。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can use calendar apps to set reminders and check my schedule anytime, which is more convenient than using paper lists.

× Yeah, I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm the kind of people who doesn't have a good memory.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm the kind of person who doesn't have a good memory.

这里的错误是单复数不一致。'kind'后面应该接单数名词，正确的是'person'而不是'people'。'people'是复数形式，和'singular'的'kind'不匹配。

× Yeah, I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm the kind of people who doesn't have a good memory.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list when I go shopping because I'm the kind of person who doesn't have a good memory.

这里的动词'doesn't'是针对单数第三人称的，前面的'people'是复数，导致主谓不一致。改为单数'person'后，动词形式'doesn't'才正确。

× So I need to write what I need to buy the things on the list and to check them out when I go shopping.

✓ So I need to write the things I need to buy on the list and check them off when I go shopping.

介词使用错误，'buy the things on the list'中'what I need to buy the things'结构不正确，应调整为'write the things I need to buy on the list'。另外，'check them out'通常指结账，表达检查清单项应使用'check them off'。

× I think maybe these kind of people have a good memory or they born with good memory, so actually they do not rely on the making lists to help them memorize something.

✓ I think maybe these kinds of people have a good memory or they are born with a good memory, so actually they do not rely on making lists to help them memorize something.

介词和表达错误：'these kind of people'应为复数形式'these kinds of people'；'they born'缺少助动词，应为'they are born'；'rely on the making lists'中'the'不应出现，正确为'rely on making lists'。

× I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because I have a calendar app on my phone which I can set my reminders and check my, uh, check my schedules wherever I am.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because I have a calendar app on my phone with which I can set my reminders and check my schedules wherever I am.

介词使用不当，'which I can set my reminders and check my schedules'前应加介词'with'，构成'with which'，使句子更正式和准确。