List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ кейбір сөйлемдер қайталанып тұр және грамматикалық қателер бар. Мысалы, 'do list' орнына 'make a list' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқарту және байланыстыру сөздерін қолдану арқылы жауапты тиімдірек етіңіз.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money. For instance, when I shop for groceries, having a list keeps me focused and organized.

제안: Жауабыңызда негізгі ой бар, бірақ сөйлем құрылымы мен сөз қолдануында қателіктер бар. 'Do not miss something important' орнына 'not miss anything important' деп айту дұрыс. Сонымен қатар, 'That's so that's all' деген сөйлемді алып тастаған дұрыс, себебі ол мағынасыз және жауапты аяқтамайды.

예시: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me focus on important tasks and ensure I don't miss anything. Making lists is very helpful for staying organized.

제안: Жауабыңызда негізгі идея бар, бірақ сөйлемдерде грамматикалық және сөз қолдану қателері бар. Мысалы, 'that kind of people' орнына 'those kinds of people' немесе 'some people' деп айту керек. 'Unexpected or surprisingly' орнына 'unexpected or surprising things' деп айту дұрыс. Сонымен қатар, жауапты қысқарту және байланыстыру сөздерін қосу қажет.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer spontaneity and find lists boring or too structured.

제안: Жауабыңыз түсінікті, бірақ кейбір сөйлемдер ұзақ және күрделі. Мысалы, 'more comfortable option for me than taking some paper and then pen and after all of this writing my plan and so on' деген сөйлемді қысқарту керек. Сонымен қатар, байланыстыру сөздерін қолдану арқылы жауапты жақсартыңыз.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than using paper and pen. For example, having a list on my phone helps me remember my tasks easily.

× Yes, I consistently do list when I shop because when you do lists you won't buy anything unnecessary to buy and then you will save your money.

✓ Yes, I consistently make a list when I shop because when you make lists you won't buy anything unnecessary and then you will save your money.

The word 'list' should be singular when referring to the action of making one list at a time, so 'do list' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Also, 'do lists' should be 'make lists' because 'make a list' is the correct collocation in English. Additionally, 'anything unnecessary to buy' is redundant; 'anything unnecessary' suffices.

× For example, I do lists when I need to buy some groceries from shop and it really helps me.

✓ For example, I make lists when I need to buy some groceries from the shop and it really helps me.

Again, 'do lists' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make lists'. Also, 'from shop' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shop'.

× Yes, I usually make lists for my work because it helps me to focus on highlights and do not miss something important when I'm working.

✓ Yes, I usually make lists for my work because they help me to focus on highlights and not miss anything important when I'm working.

'Lists' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, 'do not miss something important' is better expressed as 'not miss anything important' for naturalness.

× In my point of view, that kind of people don't like something patterned, they like something unexpected or surprisingly because making lists is too boring for them.

✓ In my point of view, those kinds of people don't like anything patterned; they like something unexpected or surprising because making lists is too boring for them.

'That kind of people' is incorrect; it should be 'those kinds of people' to agree in number. Also, 'something patterned' is better as 'anything patterned' to express general dislike. 'Surprisingly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'surprising' is needed to describe 'something'.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more comfortable option for me than taking some paper and then pen and after all of this writing my plan and so on.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's a more comfortable option for me than taking some paper and a pen and then writing my plan and so on.

The phrase 'more comfortable option' needs the article 'a' before it. Also, 'taking some paper and then pen' is better as 'taking some paper and a pen' for parallel structure and clarity. 'After all of this writing my plan' is awkward; 'then writing my plan' is clearer.