List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为重复，且语言不够自然。建议直接回答问题后，简洁说明原因，避免重复表达。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

제안: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I don't make lists for work or study because I prefer to handle tasks as they come, and making lists doesn't help me stay organized.

제안: 回答中有重复和不连贯的问题，建议先给出原因，再用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find them unnecessary; for example, they might create a list but never refer to it, which feels like a waste of time.

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子结构可以更简洁，注意语法和连贯性。建议先直接回答，再用具体原因支持。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I won't lose them like paper lists.

× I'm not a type of person like making plans and doing any lists before I do anything.

✓ I'm not the type of person who likes making plans and making lists before I do anything.

The phrase 'like making plans' is incorrect here; it should be 'who likes making plans' to correctly describe the type of person. Also, 'doing any lists' is unnatural; 'making lists' is the correct collocation.

× No, neither do I make a list for my work or my study because I'm not the type of person just like what I said just now, who who likes like planning everything I decide to.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work or my study because I'm not the type of person, as I said just now, who likes planning everything I decide to do.

The sentence has redundant words ('who who likes like') and incorrect pronoun usage. It should be simplified and corrected to maintain clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually decide to do the things beforehand.

✓ I usually decide on the things beforehand.

The verb 'decide' is commonly followed by the preposition 'on' when referring to choices or plans. 'Decide to do' is correct when followed by a verb, but here 'the things' is a noun phrase, so 'decide on the things' is appropriate.

× Because it's, I don't think it's necessary to make lists, because after making a list, I would not, I wouldn't use it.

✓ Because I don't think it's necessary to make lists, since after making a list, I wouldn't use it.

The original sentence has an unnecessary comma and awkward phrasing. 'Because it's,' is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.

× And so it's not necessary and it's uncomfortable for me and I, it's like wasting time for me when I make this.

✓ So it's not necessary, it's uncomfortable for me, and it feels like a waste of time when I make one.

The sentence has awkward pronoun usage and structure. 'I, it's like wasting time for me' is incorrect; it should be 'it feels like a waste of time' to express the idea properly.

× Definitely on my phone if I have to, because nowadays in the digital world are more convenient for us and using a paper we might lose it and it's not convenient.

✓ Definitely on my phone if I have to, because nowadays the digital world is more convenient for us, and if we use paper, we might lose it, which is not convenient.

The sentence has missing articles ('the digital world'), subject-verb agreement errors ('are' should be 'is'), and awkward phrasing ('using a paper'). Correct prepositions and articles improve clarity.