List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by completing the last sentence and adding a linking word to make it more natural. Also, avoid incomplete phrases like 'spending unnecessary'.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused on the products, and it prevents me from spending money unnecessarily.

제안: Your response is good with a linking word 'However', but you should use the correct article 'a' before 'list' and improve sentence fluency by using present perfect tense for assigned tasks. Also, try to add a bit more detail.

예시: I always make a list for my work. However, sometimes it does not work because my manager has assigned unexpected tasks with crucial deadlines, which disrupt my plans.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains a subject-verb agreement error ('dislikes' should be 'dislike'). Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their choices. Instead, they prefer to explore different products freely and compare them before deciding.

제안: Your answer is clear and coherent. To improve, use a linking word like 'since' or 'as' to connect reasons and avoid repeating 'and'. Also, you can add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

예시: I prefer making a list on my phone since it is reliable and handy, and I always carry my phone with me, which makes it easy to check my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused on the products and prevents me from spending unnecessary.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused on the products and prevents me from spending unnecessarily.

The word 'unnecessary' is an adjective and cannot be used alone as an adverb. The correct adverb form is 'unnecessarily' to modify the verb 'spending'. This correction improves the sentence's grammatical accuracy.

× I always make list for my work. However, sometimes it does not work because my manager assigned unexpected tasks with crucial deadlines.

✓ I always make a list for my work. However, sometimes it does not work because my manager assigns unexpected tasks with crucial deadlines.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' which is necessary for singular countable nouns. Also, 'assigned' should be 'assigns' to agree with the present tense context indicated by 'sometimes' and to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Some people dislikes making lists as it limits their choices. Instead, they prefer to explore different products and compare them.

✓ Some people dislike making lists as it limits their choices. Instead, they prefer to explore different products and compare them.

The subject 'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'dislike' instead of 'dislikes' to maintain subject-verb agreement.