List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сіздің жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ кейбір грамматикалық қателер мен сөздерді дұрыс қолданбау байқалады. Мысалы, 'should to buy' дұрыс емес, 'should buy' деп айту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді қысқарту және нақтылау қажет. Мәтінді логикалық байланыстыру үшін 'because' және 'so' сияқты байланыс сөздерін дұрыс пайдаланыңыз.

예시: Yes, I do. I like taking notes because it helps me remember what I need to buy. I usually use the notes app on my phone to write down my shopping list.

제안: Жауабыңызда сөздерді қайталау және сөйлем құрылымында шатасу бар. Мәтінді қысқарту және нақтылау қажет. Мысалы, 'I don't have to forget' дегеннің орнына 'I don't want to forget' деп айту дұрыс болады. Байланыс сөздерін қолданып, жауапты логикалық түрде құрыңыз.

예시: Sometimes, when I have important tasks that I don't want to forget, I take notes on my phone. It reminds me to complete them, and it works well for me.

제안: Жауабыңызда 'making leaves' деген қате сөз қолданылған, дұрыс нұсқасы 'making lists'. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдер қайталанып, мағынасы түсініксіз. Сөйлемдерді нақты және қысқа етіп құрыңыз, және дұрыс сөздерді қолданыңыз.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind. They think writing lists takes too much time.

제안: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ кейбір сөз тіркестері дұрыс емес, мысалы, 'making it on the list' орнына 'making it on paper' деп айту керек. Сондай-ақ, 'So phone is my decision' деген сөйлемді 'So, I prefer using my phone' деп түзету керек. Байланыс сөздерін дұрыс қолданыңыз.

예시: I prefer making my list on my phone because it is more convenient than using paper. I can carry my phone everywhere and check my list anytime I want, so I always choose my phone.

× Yes I do because I like taking notes so I don't forget what I should to buy or what I need.

✓ Yes I do because I like taking notes so I don't forget what I should buy or what I need.

The phrase 'should to buy' is incorrect because modal verbs like 'should' are followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. The correct form is 'should buy'.

× I usually use the application notes on my phone and right there write down there my need.

✓ I usually use the Notes application on my phone and write down my needs there.

The phrase 'right there write down there my need' is awkward and incorrect. 'Write down' should be followed directly by the object, and 'my need' should be pluralized to 'my needs' to match the context. Also, 'application notes' should be 'Notes application' to correctly name the app.

× Sometimes when I have some important tasks or things that I don't, I, I, I don't have to forget, I take some notes on my phone so it will remind me to do to do it.

✓ Sometimes when I have some important tasks or things that I don't want to forget, I take some notes on my phone so it will remind me to do them.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('I, I, I don't have to forget'). The phrase 'things that I don't' is incomplete and should be 'things that I don't want to forget'. Also, 'to do to do it' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'to do them' to refer to the tasks.

× There are certain type of people who don't like making leaves.

✓ There are certain types of people who don't like making lists.

'Type' should be pluralized to 'types' to agree with 'there are'. Also, 'making leaves' is incorrect; the correct word is 'lists' when referring to written notes.

× They often prefer to keep in their keeping in your mind.

✓ They often prefer to keep things in their mind.

The phrase 'keep in their keeping in your mind' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'keep things in their mind' to correctly express the idea of remembering without writing.

× They don't spend time on making leaves.

✓ They don't spend time making lists.

'Making leaves' is incorrect; the correct term is 'making lists'. Also, 'spend time on making' is less natural than 'spend time making'.

× I prefer making my list on my phone.

✓ I prefer making my list on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is beneficial and more convenient than making it on the list.

✓ It is beneficial and more convenient than making it on paper.

The phrase 'making it on the list' is incorrect because 'list' is not a surface or medium. The correct phrase is 'making it on paper' to indicate writing on paper.

× Therefore, I can take my phone everywhere. I can look on my list anytime I want. So phone is my decision.

✓ Therefore, I can take my phone everywhere. I can look at my list anytime I want. So the phone is my choice.

The phrase 'look on my list' should be 'look at my list' as 'look at' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'So phone is my decision' is incorrect; it should be 'So the phone is my choice' to express preference.