List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且直接，但表达稍显重复，且缺少连接词使句子流畅。建议减少重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list of groceries before shopping because it helps me focus on what I really need and avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I prefer to make a to-do list before work or study because breaking tasks into smaller parts makes them easier to manage.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且缺少逻辑连接。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词，并清晰表达观点。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to follow their feelings and don't want to be restricted by a fixed plan.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，且句子不够连贯。建议练习句子结构，使用连接词，并清晰表达偏好原因。

예시: I have tried both methods, but I prefer making lists on paper because writing helps me organize my thoughts more clearly.

× Oh, I guess because enjoy.

✓ Oh, I guess because they enjoy.

句子中缺少主语，导致语法错误。应加上主语'they'，使句子完整。

× They enjoy doing things, follow following their hearts.

✓ They enjoy doing things, following their hearts.

动词'follow'后面应使用动名词形式'following'，表示伴随动作。

× if they don't want to be stricted to a list they are supposed to arrange.

✓ if they don't want to be strict to a list they are supposed to arrange.

'stricted'不是正确的形容词，正确形式是'strict'，表示严格的。

× Oh, actually I bought these two ways.

✓ Oh, actually I tried these two ways.

'bought'表示购买，与句意不符，应使用'tried'表示尝试。

× I tried.

✓ I tried both.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，补充'both'使句子完整。