List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using linking words to make your response smoother. Also, use more natural phrasing.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise, so having a list helps me remember everything I need.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid confusion. Also, avoid repeating negatives and clarify your ideas.

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible. However, sometimes I use reminders on my phone to stay organized.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid repeating words and try to be more specific in your reasons.

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary. However, I prefer making lists as they help me remember tasks and manage my time more effectively.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, whereas paper lists can be inconvenient to carry around.

× I don't usually don't do that because I think that everybody shouldn't do it.

✓ I don't usually do that because I think that not everybody should do it.

The sentence contains a double negative 'don't usually don't' which is incorrect. Also, 'everybody shouldn't do it' is better expressed as 'not everybody should do it' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× And I also didn't understand what did you, what did you ask me?

✓ And I also didn't understand what you asked me.

The sentence incorrectly uses question word order in an indirect question. In indirect questions, the subject comes before the verb, so 'what did you ask me?' should be 'what you asked me.'

× Honestly, I'm not sure why some people prefer not to make lists, but I think it might be because they find time consuming or unnecessary.

✓ Honestly, I'm not sure why some people prefer not to make lists, but I think it might be because they find it time-consuming or unnecessary.

The phrase 'find time consuming' is missing the object 'it' and the adjective should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' to correctly modify the noun.

× It helps me to stay organized and manage my better time time better.

✓ It helps me to stay organized and manage my time better.

The phrase 'manage my better time time better' is redundant and incorrectly ordered. The correct phrase is 'manage my time better.'

× I prefer making a list on my phone because phone is with me every time when I go to any place.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because the phone is with me every time I go anywhere.

The noun 'phone' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific phone. Also, 'any place' is better expressed as 'anywhere' in this context.

× But making a list on a page, it might be difficult to just put it in your pants and don't just.

✓ But making a list on paper might be difficult because you can't just put it in your pants and take it with you.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'On a page' should be 'on paper.' The phrase 'don't just' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'take it with you' to convey the intended meaning.