List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding redundancy. Instead of 'noting it in the pen, in my paper or in my reminder,' you could say 'writing it down on paper or setting a reminder on my phone.' Also, try to keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I have a poor memory. I usually write it down on paper or set a reminder on my phone to make sure I don't forget anything.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural language. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I do make lists for my work because I often forget my tasks. Therefore, I write them down on my phone or on paper to stay organised.'

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because I often forget my tasks. Therefore, I write them down on my phone or on paper to stay organised and ensure I complete everything on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or a waste of time. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on their memory as they believe it is strong enough.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or a waste of time. Moreover, they may trust their memory and feel confident they can remember everything without writing it down.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your reasons. For example, 'I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. In contrast, paper lists can be lost easily. Also, setting reminders on my phone helps me remember tasks effectively.'

예시: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. In contrast, paper lists can be lost easily. Also, setting reminders on my phone helps me remember tasks effectively.

× So I just go for my list by noting it in the pen, in my paper or in my reminder.

✓ So I just go for my list by noting it with a pen, on my paper, or in my reminder.

The prepositions used with 'noting' are incorrect. We say 'noting it with a pen' and 'on my paper' instead of 'in the pen' or 'in my paper'. Also, 'in my reminder' is acceptable if referring to a digital reminder, but the prepositions need to be consistent and correct.

× So I just go for my list by noting it in the pen, in my paper or in my reminder.

✓ So I just go for my list by noting it with a pen, on my paper, or in my reminder.

The prepositions 'in the pen' and 'in my paper' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'with a pen' and 'on my paper' because we use 'with' to indicate the instrument used and 'on' for surfaces like paper.

× Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duty easily so I list my do work in my phone or write down in a paper or something like that to.

✓ Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duties easily, so I list my work on my phone or write it down on paper or something like that too.

The phrase 'assigned duty' should be plural 'assigned duties' to match the plural 'plans'. Also, 'in a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is an uncountable noun here. 'To' at the end is incorrect and should be 'too' to mean 'also'.

× Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duty easily so I list my do work in my phone or write down in a paper or something like that to.

✓ Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duties easily, so I list my work on my phone or write it down on paper or something like that too.

The preposition 'in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone' when referring to storing information digitally. Similarly, 'write down in a paper' should be 'write it down on paper'.

× Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duty easily so I list my do work in my phone or write down in a paper or something like that to.

✓ Yes, because I tend to forget my plans or assigned duties easily, so I list my work on my phone or write it down on paper or something like that too.

The phrase 'my do work' is incorrect. It should be 'my work' or 'the work I have to do'. Also, 'write down' needs an object, so 'write it down' is correct.

× Because some people that think that it is not a necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that, they always tend to avoid such a settings to sometimes sign time management or anything, or they are more capable in the memory power like that.

✓ Because some people think that it is not necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that. They always tend to avoid such settings to sometimes assign time management or anything, or they have better memory power like that.

The pronoun 'that' after 'some people' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'a necessary' should be 'necessary' without an article. 'Such a settings' is incorrect; 'settings' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Sign time management' seems to be a mishearing or misuse; 'assign time management' or 'practice time management' is more appropriate. 'More capable in the memory power' should be 'have better memory power'.

× Because some people that think that it is not a necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that, they always tend to avoid such a settings to sometimes sign time management or anything, or they are more capable in the memory power like that.

✓ Because some people think that it is not necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that. They always tend to avoid such settings to sometimes assign time management or anything, or they have better memory power like that.

The article 'a' before 'necessary' is incorrect because 'necessary' is an adjective and does not need an article. Also, 'such a settings' is incorrect because 'settings' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'.

× Because some people that think that it is not a necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that, they always tend to avoid such a settings to sometimes sign time management or anything, or they are more capable in the memory power like that.

✓ Because some people think that it is not necessary for them, it's a waste of time or something like that. They always tend to avoid such settings to sometimes assign time management or anything, or they have better memory power like that.

The phrase 'more capable in the memory power' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'have better memory power' or 'are better at memory'.

× Usually I make the list on my phone because phone is actually available for me at any time and when we write in the paper it's whenever it's a chance for the loss of the paper.

✓ Usually I make the list on my phone because the phone is actually available to me at any time, and when we write on paper, there is a chance of losing the paper.

The preposition 'in the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' because we write on the surface of paper. Also, 'available for me' should be 'available to me'. The phrase 'it's whenever it's a chance for the loss of the paper' is awkward and corrected to 'there is a chance of losing the paper'.

× Usually I make the list on my phone because phone is actually available for me at any time and when we write in the paper it's whenever it's a chance for the loss of the paper.

✓ Usually I make the list on my phone because the phone is actually available to me at any time, and when we write on paper, there is a chance of losing the paper.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'phone' when referring to a specific phone (the speaker's phone). Also, 'the paper' is unnecessary when referring to paper in general; 'on paper' is the correct phrase.

× Or like that when I record it in my phone or setting a reminder, I can easily get through it.

✓ Or like that, when I record it on my phone or set a reminder, I can easily access it.

The phrase 'or setting a reminder' is incorrect; it should be parallel with 'record', so 'or set a reminder'. Also, 'get through it' is not appropriate here; 'access it' or 'retrieve it' is better.