List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to add a linking phrase and a bit more specific detail to make it more natural and engaging. For example, explain why making a list helps you or give a brief example.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy a lot of things. This helps me stay organised because I can check off items as I go, which means I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitations and minor grammar errors. To improve, try to speak more fluently, avoid filler words like 'uh', and use correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often write a to-do list at the beginning of the day because it helps me manage my time better and keeps me focused on the tasks I need to complete. Therefore, it works quite well for me.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'making this' and use 'making lists' instead.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it too time-consuming, or they believe they can remember everything without writing it down. Additionally, some prefer being spontaneous rather than following a strict plan.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some hesitations and minor grammar issues. To improve, try to speak more fluently, avoid filler words, and use plural forms correctly. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient to carry around, and I don't have to worry about losing important notes. Moreover, I can easily add and prioritise tasks using apps, which helps me stay organised and efficient throughout the day.

× Yes, I often write A to do list, uh, at the beginning of the day.

✓ Yes, I often write a to-do list, uh, at the beginning of the day.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is in the middle of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the compound noun.

× It really helped me to be to manage my uh, time better and uh, keeps me focused on what needs to be done, uh, within a day.

✓ It really helps me to manage my, uh, time better and, uh, keeps me focused on what needs to be done, uh, within a day.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense but the context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'to be to manage' is incorrect; it should be 'to manage'.

× I think some people dislike making this because they think that it's too time consuming or they can remember everything without writing it down more.

✓ I think some people dislike making lists because they think that it's too time-consuming or they can remember everything without writing it down.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The word 'more' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because, uh, I find it more convenient for me to carry around as I don't have to worry about losing a piece of important notes.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because, uh, I find it more convenient to carry around as I don't have to worry about losing a piece of important notes.

The phrase 'for me to carry around' is unnecessarily wordy; 'to carry around' is sufficient and more natural. Also, 'a piece of important notes' is incorrect; it should be 'a piece of important note' or better 'important notes' without 'a piece of'.

× I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because, uh, I find it more convenient for me to carry around as I don't have to worry about losing a piece of important notes.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because, uh, I find it more convenient to carry around as I don't have to worry about losing important notes.

The phrase 'a piece of important notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a piece of'. Removing 'a piece of' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.