List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构不够清晰，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and shop more efficiently.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且明确说明做清单的好处。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me remember my tasks and stay organized.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome or believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and there are many apps that help me organize my tasks clearly.

× I'm going shopping because make making this can help me clear what I want to buy and it makes me efficiently to buy all things I have to buy.

✓ I'm going shopping because making this can help me clear what I want to buy and it helps me buy all the things I have to buy efficiently.

这里错误地使用了“make making”，应使用动名词“making”表示动作。并且“makes me efficiently to buy”结构不正确，应改为“helps me buy ... efficiently”，以正确表达意思。

× it makes me efficiently to buy all things I have to buy.

✓ it helps me buy all the things I have to buy efficiently.

“efficiently”是副词，应修饰动词“buy”，而不是“makes me”。原句结构混乱，需调整语序使副词修饰正确。

× I think making a list can help me clear clear that I was things I need to do and it helps us not to forget it initially.

✓ I think making a list can help me clear about the things I need to do and it helps me not to forget them initially.

“clear clear that I was things”语法错误，应该用“clear about the things”来表达清楚需要做的事情。并且“helps us”应改为“helps me”，保持主语一致。

× it helps us not to forget it initially.

✓ it helps me not to forget them initially.

前文主语是“我”，此处应使用第一人称单数“me”，且“it”指代不明确，应改为复数“them”指代“things”。

× I think some people don't like making this because they think it is so so bother and they don't have time to do it.

✓ I think some people don't like making this because they think it is so bothersome and they don't have time to do it.

“bother”是名词或动词，形容词应为“bothersome”，表示“令人烦恼的”。“so so”重复，应去掉一个。

× Or some people may think they can. They can remember all the things clearly that they didn't need to make a list.

✓ Or some people may think they can remember all the things clearly and that they don't need to make a list.

句子断裂，“they can.”后应接动词，且时态应与上下文一致，改为现在时“don't need”。

× I prefer to make a list on my because I think it is convenient to make a list in a phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is convenient to make a list on a phone.

“on my”缺少名词，应为“on my phone”。“in a phone”应改为“on a phone”，因为“list”是在手机屏幕上显示，使用介词“on”。

× You can use main, you can use many app that help you to make this clearly and you can you can take your home to look your list.

✓ You can use many apps that help you make this clearly and you can take your phone to look at your list.

“many app”应为复数“many apps”。“take your home”错误，应为“take your phone”。“look your list”应为“look at your list”，动词“look”后需加介词“at”。

× That ensures you don't insure you that you will not forget anything.

✓ That ensures you that you will not forget anything.

“don't insure you”是错误表达，应去掉“don't insure you”，保持句子通顺。