List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多语气词和重复，表达不够清晰自然。建议减少填充词，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. If I see something I need, I will buy it; otherwise, I just leave.

제안: 回答未完整，表达不流畅且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并合理使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. I usually do the most important things first, then move on to less urgent ones.

제안: 回答含糊且重复，缺乏具体理由。建议给出明确原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and rely on their memory instead.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的语法和丰富的词汇，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily add or check items anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget.

× Actually I don't know because I am a person that like making list.

✓ Actually I don't know because I am a person that likes making lists.

这里主语是单数的"person"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"likes"。另外，"list"应使用复数形式"lists"，因为泛指喜欢制作清单的行为。

× Actually I don't know because I am a person that like making list.

✓ Actually I don't know because I am a person that likes making lists.

主语是单数第三人称"person"，谓语动词应加-s，变为"likes"。

× I think the list can help me to know what is the most important thing.

✓ I think the list can help me know what the most important things are.

"the most important thing"应改为复数形式"the most important things"，因为通常有多个重要事项。

× I will first do that and what is nice important thing and I will do that after the more important thing so I will make a.

✓ I will first do that and then do the less important things after the more important things, so I will make a list.

句子中"nice important thing"表达不清，应改为"less important things"，且保持复数形式。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think make list on my phone is more convenient than make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think making a list on my phone is more convenient than making a list on paper.

动词"make"后应使用动名词形式"making"，以符合句子结构。

× And sometimes we don't have the paper and pen, but I take my phone every time, so it might more convenient, yeah.

✓ And sometimes we don't have paper and pen, but I take my phone every time, so it might be more convenient, yeah.

"the paper and pen"中不需要定冠词"the"，且缺少动词"be"，应为"might be more convenient"。