List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise. For example, instead of repeating 'because', say: 'I make a list when I shop as it saves time and prevents overspending.'

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it saves me time and helps me avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Avoid filler phrases like 'like' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Be more precise and concise in your explanation. For example, say: 'I make a list when I have many tasks because it acts as a roadmap and helps me manage my time efficiently.'

예시: Yes, when I have many tasks, I make a list because it acts as a roadmap and helps me manage my time efficiently.

제안: Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'all that' and 'I don't know'. Use linking words to structure your answer logically.

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously, but I believe lists are important as they help organise tasks effectively.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare options and explain your preference clearly.

예시: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone's notes app because it's more convenient and I don't risk forgetting the list at home.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go for grocery shopping or any type of shoppings because because it is much easier, it saves me a lot of time and honestly it saves me for overspending and buying unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go for grocery shopping or any type of shopping because it is much easier, it saves me a lot of time and honestly it saves me from overspending and buying unnecessary things.

The word 'shoppings' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised. Also, the phrase 'saves me for overspending' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate prevention. Therefore, 'shoppings' should be 'shopping' and 'saves me for overspending' should be 'saves me from overspending'.

× I can't really tell that why people don't like to make list, but it is really like important and very useful.

✓ I can't really tell why people don't like to make lists, but it is really important and very useful.

The noun 'list' should be pluralised to 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists, not a single list. Also, the phrase 'tell that why' is incorrect; 'tell why' is the correct form. The word 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed for clarity.

× honestly it saves me for overspending and buying unnecessary things.

✓ honestly it saves me from overspending and buying unnecessary things.

The verb 'saves' is typically followed by the preposition 'from' when indicating prevention of something. Using 'for' is incorrect in this context.

× sometimes you just forgot the list in your home and it is like.

✓ sometimes you just forget the list at home and it is like that.

The verb tense should be present tense 'forget' to match the context. The preposition 'in' is less common here; 'at home' is the usual expression. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'that' completes the thought.