List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达原因。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

제안: 回答内容重复且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并用清晰的句子表达观点。

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to handle tasks as they come.

제안: 回答不够具体，表达不清晰。建议明确说明原因，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

제안: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，难以理解。建议用简单句表达偏好，并说明理由。

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit.

× Yeah, absolutely not. For me it is a difficult thing to merely before the shop.

✓ Yeah, absolutely not. For me, it is a difficult thing to plan before shopping.

这里动词短语需要使用动名词形式，表示“在购物之前计划”，应使用shopping而不是before the shop。

× It is a random thing to shop this, to buy, to purchase many things in the shop.

✓ It is a random thing to shop, to buy, to purchase many things in the shop.

这里“shop this”不符合习惯表达，应去掉“this”，保持动词不定式结构。

× For me it is very hard to to.

✓ For me, it is very hard to do.

句子不完整，缺少动词，补充动词“do”使句子完整。

× Not really for me, I don't like make a list before the before the shop before shopping.

✓ Not really for me, I don't like to make a list before shopping.

“like”后应接动词不定式“to make”，且“before the before the shop”重复且不自然，应简化为“before shopping”。

× I really like purchase What I see it is it is depend on me what happened on my brains.

✓ I really like to purchase what I see; it depends on me and what happens in my mind.

“like”后应接动词不定式“to purchase”；“What”不应大写；“it is depend”应为“it depends”；“happened”时态不对，应为一般现在时“happens”；“brains”应为单数“mind”。

× I don't like have a wrist.

✓ I don't like to have a list.

“wrist”是“手腕”，应为“list”（清单），且“like”后应接动词不定式“to have”。

× Yes, I think it is the trouble thing of many people have, at least before shopping.

✓ Yes, I think it is a troublesome thing that many people have, at least before shopping.

“trouble”是名词，形容词应为“troublesome”；“the trouble thing”用法错误，应为“a troublesome thing”；“of many people have”结构不正确，应改为“that many people have”。

× In my opinion, when we have a project, we need to have a lead on our brains.

✓ In my opinion, when we have a plan, we need to have a lead in our minds.

“project”不符合语境，应为“plan”（计划）；“lead on our brains”表达不自然，应为“lead in our minds”。

× Yet I think so. I'll have a link on my phone before I purchase some goods before shopping.

✓ Yes, I think so. I'll have a list on my phone before I purchase some goods or before shopping.

“Yet”用法不当，应为“Yes”；“link”应为“list”；句子结构调整使表达更自然。

× I have a leak. It will make my It will make my have a a have a pro have a project to.

✓ I have a list. It will help me have a plan.

“leak”应为“list”；后半句语法混乱，简化为“It will help me have a plan”更通顺。