List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: この回答は自然で効果的ですが、少し冗長で、話の流れを明確にするために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。また、具体的な理由や例を加えると内容が豊かになります。例えば、なぜリストを作らないのか、どのように時間がかかるのかを説明してください。

예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to choose items spontaneously. However, this often causes me to spend more time wandering around the supermarket, which can be inefficient. Therefore, I realize that making a list would help me shop more quickly and effectively.

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も具体的ですが、文のつながりをより明確にするために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。また、リストを作った時の具体的な効果や感想をもう少し詳しく述べると良いです。

예시: I rarely make a list for work because I prefer to be spontaneous. However, this approach sometimes causes me to miss tasks. On one occasion, I made a list, and it was very helpful because it allowed me to complete my work more precisely and efficiently.

제안: 回答は少し曖昧で、言い淀みや繰り返しがあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、簡潔に理由を述べ、具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to organizing their tasks, which can make the process feel stressful and overwhelming.

제안: 回答は明確で自然ですが、最後の文が少し不完全です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、理由をより詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: I definitely prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so I'm less likely to forget the list. Also, I can set alarms to remind me about important tasks, which is very convenient.

× I tend to be unprepared when I go shopping.

✓ I tend to be unprepared when I go shopping.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses the present tense appropriately to describe a habitual action.

× I have a few ideas of what I want to buy, but after that I just let myself wander around the supermarket, which just takes too much time sometimes.

✓ I have a few ideas of what I want to buy, but after that I just let myself wander around the supermarket, which sometimes takes too much time.

The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed before the verb 'takes' to improve natural English word order.

× And I do know I should make a list.

✓ And I do know I should make a list.

This sentence is correct; the modal verb 'should' is used properly to express obligation or advice.

× I have to admit I rarely make a list when I'm working.

✓ I have to admit I rarely make a list when I'm working.

This sentence correctly uses the present tense to describe a habitual action.

× I tend to be very spontaneous sometimes and that sometimes causes me a lot of trouble later because I can't.

✓ I tend to be very spontaneous sometimes and that sometimes causes me a lot of trouble later because I can't.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'because I can't.' It should be completed for clarity, but no specific grammar problem from the list applies here.

× I don't have some of my tasks done.

✓ I don't have some of my tasks done.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense to express an incomplete state; no correction needed.

× But one time I did make a list.

✓ But one time I did make a list.

The past tense is correctly used here to refer to a specific past event.

× I found it really helpful.

✓ I found it really helpful.

The past tense is correctly used to describe a past experience.

× I was able to work a lot with a lot more precision.

✓ I was able to work with a lot more precision.

The phrase 'a lot' is redundant when used twice; removing the first 'a lot' improves clarity and style.

× In my case, because I don't really make a list, I think it's just the uh, just I'm not used to organizing what I should do the tasks and that just causes me stress of making the list.

✓ In my case, because I don't really make a list, I think it's just that I'm not used to organizing the tasks I should do, and that just causes me stress about making the list.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. Replacing 'just the uh, just I'm not used to organizing what I should do the tasks' with 'just that I'm not used to organizing the tasks I should do' clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun and sentence structure issues.

× So that's why.

✓ So that's why.

This sentence is a correct present tense statement used to conclude an explanation.

× Oh it's definitely on my phone because I always have my phone with me and it's less likely for me to forget it whenever I go somewhere and look at that list.

✓ Oh, it's definitely on my phone because I always have my phone with me, and it's less likely that I will forget it whenever I go somewhere and look at that list.

Adding commas improves readability. Changing 'less likely for me to forget it' to 'less likely that I will forget it' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× And honestly, I can use the alarm in my phone whenever.

✓ And honestly, I can use the alarm on my phone whenever I want.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using features on a phone. Adding 'I want' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.