List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I believe making a list is useful as it helps distinguish between needs and wants, which can prevent unnecessary purchases.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but ends abruptly and could be more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and complete your thoughts fully. Also, try to avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: I don't usually make lists when my workload is light, but when I'm very busy, I create lists to organise my tasks and schedule. This method works well because it helps me stay focused and manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but could be clearer and more grammatically accurate. Use linking words to connect reasons and provide specific examples. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like 'the reality always shows difference'.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they often set too many tasks, which can feel overwhelming and discouraging. Additionally, unexpected events can disrupt their plans, making the list less useful than intended.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and precise. Avoid unnecessary details like 'interesting games' unless clearly explained. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve flow.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many useful apps that help organise tasks and set reminders. These apps make planning easier and keep me motivated to complete my goals.

× I think the first reason is that they always can't finish them all, or they set too much things on the list that make them unwilling to complete.

✓ I think the first reason is that they always can't finish them all, or they set too many things on the list that make them unwilling to complete.

The phrase 'too much things' is incorrect because 'things' is a countable noun and requires the quantifier 'too many' instead of 'too much', which is used for uncountable nouns. To improve, use 'too many' with countable nouns.

× And it actually works because it can help my mind get organized and.

✓ And it actually works because it can help my mind get organized.

The sentence ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and' without a following clause, resulting in a sentence fragment. To correct, remove the trailing 'and' to complete the sentence properly.