List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并且用更连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find shopping relaxing. I prefer to buy things spontaneously, especially items that catch my eye. Also, I have a good memory that helps me remember what I need.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态一致性。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks efficiently. I feel satisfied when I check off completed items. Moreover, I often use digital apps to manage my lists effectively.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词提高连贯性。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed by seeing many tasks waiting to be done. Also, they prefer to act spontaneously, enjoying the freedom to choose what to do next.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免重复表达。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Using digital apps is convenient for managing and prioritizing my tasks effectively.

× You know shopping is a way for relaxing, so I often purchase things more spontaneously and I often buy things that May 1st catch my eyes and also I have a good memory which helps me to remember things I need to.

✓ You know shopping is a way to relax, so I often purchase things more spontaneously and I often buy things that may catch my eye, and also I have a good memory which helps me to remember things I need to.

“a way for relaxing” 应改为 “a way to relax”，因为“a way to do something”是固定搭配，表示做某事的方法。

× You know shopping is a way for relaxing, so I often purchase things more spontaneously and I often buy things that May 1st catch my eyes and also I have a good memory which helps me to remember things I need to.

✓ You know shopping is a way to relax, so I often purchase things more spontaneously and I often buy things that may catch my eye, and also I have a good memory which helps me to remember things I need to.

“catch my eyes” 应改为 “catch my eye”，因为“catch one’s eye”是固定表达，意为“吸引某人注意”，eye用单数。

× And it made me feel a sense of satisfaction when I checked off for all the things, all the texts on my list.

✓ And it makes me feel a sense of satisfaction when I check off all the things, all the tasks on my list.

此句描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× And it made me feel a sense of satisfaction when I checked off for all the things, all the texts on my list.

✓ And it makes me feel a sense of satisfaction when I check off all the things, all the tasks on my list.

“checked off for”中“for”多余，应直接用“check off”表示“勾选完成”。

× Some people like the way that maybe more spontaneously and they feel the freedom of doing something.

✓ Some people like to do things more spontaneously and they feel the freedom of doing something.

“like the way that maybe more spontaneously”结构不正确，应改为“like to do things more spontaneously”，使表达更自然。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list using my phone.

“make a list on my phone”虽可理解，但更自然的表达是“make a list using my phone”，强调使用手机作为工具。