List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法正确性，使回答更流畅自然。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I see shopping as a form of entertainment. Although I like to be organized, I prefer to keep shopping fun rather than turning it into a boring task.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但时态使用不当，且句子连接略显生硬。建议注意时态一致性，使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I work or study because it helps improve my efficiency. By following the list step by step, I feel a great sense of achievement after completing each task, which motivates me to continue.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免模糊和错误表达，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be casual and spontaneous. They want to follow their feelings freely without feeling restricted. Also, making lists might make them feel anxious or pressured.

제안: 回答表达较为自然，但存在重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: It depends on the task. For studying, I prefer using paper because I'm used to it since childhood. However, for planning trips, I prefer using my phone because it's easier to make changes.

× I think shopping is 1 is a kind of entertainment in my daily life.

✓ I think shopping is a kind of entertainment in my daily life.

句子中多了一个数字“1”，应删除以保持句子通顺。

× Although I am an organized person who want to prepare in advance, I still not I am not willing to turn shopping to a boring duty in my life.

✓ Although I am an organized person who wants to prepare in advance, I am still not willing to turn shopping into a boring duty in my life.

主语是第三人称单数“who”，动词应加-s变为“wants”。句中“still not I am not”语序错误，应改为“I am still not”。“turn shopping to”应改为“turn shopping into”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, when I am working or studying, I always made a list.

✓ Yes, when I am working or studying, I always make a list.

句子描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“make”，而非过去时“made”。

× Well, I suppose there were some people that are more casual, so they don't want to waste their time and energy to make a list.

✓ Well, I suppose there are some people who are more casual, so they don't want to waste their time and energy making a list.

“there were”时态错误，应为现在时“there are”。“that”指人时应使用“who”。“waste ... to make”搭配错误，应改为“waste ... making”。

× And besides, you know, making a list, it means these people could be anxious and precious.

✓ And besides, you know, making a list means these people could be anxious and precious.

句中“making a list”作为主语，不需要逗号分隔。

× Oh well, it depends on the things what I should do.

✓ Oh well, it depends on the things that I should do.

“the things what I should do”中“what”用法错误，应改为关系代词“that”。

× For example, for the study I prefer to use paper because when I was young I just I just had the paper to use, so it is out of habit.

✓ For example, for studying I prefer to use paper because when I was young I just had paper to use, so it is out of habit.

“for the study”应改为动名词短语“for studying”。“I just I just had”重复，应删去一个。

× Besides, if I want to make a plan of traveling, I prefer to use a phone.

✓ Besides, if I want to make a travel plan, I prefer to use my phone.

“a plan of traveling”表达不自然，应改为“a travel plan”。“a phone”应改为“my phone”，更符合语境。