List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say: "Yes, definitely. I always make a list when I shop because it makes the process more convenient and organized. Moreover, it helps me avoid situations where I realize I have forgotten something after returning home, so I don't have to go back to the store."

예시: Yes, definitely. I always make a list when I shop because it makes the process more convenient and organized. Moreover, it helps me avoid situations where I realize I have forgotten something after returning home, so I don't have to go back to the store.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use past tense correctly and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to connect ideas smoothly. For instance, you can say: "Yes, definitely. I make lists for my work because I like to plan ahead. For example, when preparing for my AL exams, I planned to spend the first two days on listening practice, then move on to reading. This planning helps me complete tasks in an organized way."

예시: Yes, definitely. I make lists for my work because I like to plan ahead. For example, when preparing for my AL exams, I planned to spend the first two days on listening practice, then move on to reading. This planning helps me complete tasks in an organized way.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow by using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. For example: "I believe it depends on personal preference. Some people are less organized and don't feel the need to make lists. Also, some are good at memorizing things, so they remember what they need without writing it down."

예시: I believe it depends on personal preference. Some people are less organized and don't feel the need to make lists. Also, some are good at memorizing things, so they remember what they need without writing it down.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some awkward phrasing. Try to avoid fillers like 'uh' and use more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and convenient. Whenever I need to check something, I just take my phone out and look at my notes. This makes it an easy and efficient way to keep track of tasks."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is handy and convenient. Whenever I need to check something, I just take my phone out and look at my notes. This makes it an easy and efficient way to keep track of tasks.

× I make a list whenever I do shopping because it make shopping more convenient and more organized.

✓ I make a list whenever I do shopping because it makes shopping more convenient and more organized.

The subject 'it' refers to 'making a list', which is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number. Using 'make' is incorrect as it is plural form. Always ensure subject-verb agreement in number.

× And I it helped me to prevent from a situation where I have to go where, where, when I will return home and I check that I have missed something and I have go back to buy that one particular item.

✓ And it helped me to prevent a situation where I have to go back after I return home and check that I have missed something and have to go back to buy that one particular item.

The sentence mixes tenses and has redundant words. 'I it helped' is incorrect; 'it helped' is correct. 'Prevent from a situation' should be 'prevent a situation'. Also, 'I have go back' should be 'have to go back'. The past tense 'helped' is appropriate here as the action refers to past experience.

× So suppose for AL's preparation I have a week, so for first two days I was planned to do the listening and then reading and so on.

✓ So suppose for AL's preparation I have a week, so for the first two days I planned to do the listening and then reading and so on.

The phrase 'I was planned' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I planned' to indicate the subject performing the action. Using past simple 'planned' fits the context of a plan made in the past.

× So planning basically make me easier to do the task in well organized way.

✓ So planning basically makes it easier for me to do the task in a well-organized way.

The subject 'planning' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'make me easier' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'makes it easier for me'. Additionally, 'well organized' should be hyphenated as 'well-organized' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× I believe it's completely depends upon a person's preference.

✓ I believe it completely depends upon a person's preference.

The phrase 'it's completely depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb and should not be combined with 'it's' (it is). The correct form is 'it completely depends' where 'it' is the subject and 'depends' is the verb.

× And moreover I guess they some people are good at memorize things so they know what they want, that's why they don't.

✓ And moreover, I guess some people are good at memorizing things so they know what they want, that's why they don't.

The phrase 'they some people' is incorrect; 'some people' alone is sufficient. Also, 'good at memorize' should be 'good at memorizing' because after 'good at' the verb should be in -ing form.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's quite handy and convenient as whenever I need something to check, uh, check in, I simply, uh, take my phone out from my bag and check the notes to find something which I have to do.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's quite handy and convenient as whenever I need to check something, I simply take my phone out of my bag and check the notes to find something I have to do.

The phrase 'take my phone out from my bag' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'out of'. Also, 'need something to check, uh, check in' is awkward; it should be 'need to check something'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.