List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách mua sắm.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need and prevents me from overspending. Moreover, writing it down beforehand saves me time and keeps me focused while shopping.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app that reminds me of my duties, and I feel satisfied when I can track my progress.

제안: Bạn đã sử dụng từ sai ("sleeves" thay vì "lists") và câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên chú ý chọn từ đúng và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start working immediately without planning.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như "crossing things up" nên sửa thành "crossing things off". Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It's easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I like crossing things off the list when I finish them.

× Just I make a leave for my cook.

✓ I just make a list for my cook.

The pronoun 'I' should not be preceded by 'Just' in this way; also, 'leave' is incorrect here, the intended word is 'list'. The correct sentence is 'I just make a list for my cook.'

× It's help me stay organized and focus on what I need to do.

✓ It helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number.

× I use a digital app that reminds me about my task and I feel good when I can track thing up.

✓ I use a digital app that reminds me about my tasks and I feel good when I can track things off.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context, and 'thing' should be plural 'things'. Also, the phrase 'track thing up' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'track things off' meaning to mark them as done.

× I think some people don't like making sleeves because I think it takes too much time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because I think it takes too much time.

The word 'sleeves' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'lists'.

× They believe that that they can remember what you need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start cooking on their desk.

✓ They believe that they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start working at their desk.

The pronouns are inconsistent: 'you' should be 'they' to match the subject. Also, 'start cooking on their desk' is illogical; likely intended is 'start working at their desk'.

× I prefer making this on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

The phrase 'making this on paper' is unclear; 'making lists on paper' is more precise and appropriate.

× It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing things up the list when I am done.

✓ It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing things off the list when I am done.

The phrase 'crossing things up the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'crossing things off the list' meaning to mark them as completed.