List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“make least”应为“make a list”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意冠词的使用和句子流畅性，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized. This way, I know exactly what to buy and don't waste time wandering around the supermarket.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“catch up to that lie”不明确。建议使用更准确的表达，注意句子连贯性和逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I always make a list of tasks for the day so I can prioritize the most urgent ones and manage my time effectively.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整的句子，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免口语化填充词，增强逻辑性。

예시: I think it depends on personality. Some people prefer to be organized, while others enjoy a more spontaneous approach, which makes life more exciting for them.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误，如“digital cap”应为“digital type”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意词汇准确性和句子完整性，表达更自然。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone. I use the notes and reminder apps, and the notifications help me remember important tasks.

× I like make least of when I shop because I can be more organized when I do the shopping.

✓ I like making lists when I shop because I can be more organized when I do the shopping.

动词like后面应接动名词形式making，而不是动词原形make。这里需要用making表示喜欢做某事。

× I like make least of when I shop because I can be more organized when I do the shopping.

✓ I like making lists when I shop because I can be more organized when I do the shopping.

名词list应使用复数lists，因为通常购物时会列多个项目。

× I'm not wasting time on the shop on the supermarket.

✓ I'm not wasting time in the shop or in the supermarket.

介词on用法错误，表示在商店或超市内应使用in。

× I always make a list about what to do today and so I can know exactly what to do 1st and prioritize.

✓ I always make a list of what to do today so I can know exactly what to do first and prioritize.

动词make后接list时，正确介词是of而不是about。

× I always make a list about what to do today and so I can know exactly what to do 1st and prioritize.

✓ I always make a list of what to do today so I can know exactly what to do first and prioritize.

数字1st应写为first，避免使用数字形式。

× Prioritize the most urgent things so not to catch up to that lie.

✓ I prioritize the most urgent things so I don't fall behind schedule.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。应补充主语和谓语，并用合适表达替换catch up to that lie。

× Well, I think it's just a people's personality.

✓ Well, I think it's just people's personalities.

a people's不正确，people是复数名词，不用冠词a，且personality应复数personalities。

× Some people like to be organized, but some people just like to be, you know, more casual and they just deal with what what comes today or maybe that makes them more exciting and more.

✓ Some people like to be organized, but some people just like to be, you know, more casual and they just deal with whatever comes today; maybe that makes their life more exciting.

what what重复，应改为whatever；that makes them more exciting表达不当，应改为that makes their life more exciting。

× I'm definitely the digital cap.

✓ I'm definitely a digital person.

digital cap表达不正确，应使用digital person表示数字化的人。

× I always use the note and the reminder to put on my list, and the notification of the phone is a lifesaver.

✓ I always use the notes and reminders to put on my list, and the phone's notifications are a lifesaver.

介词to put on my list用法不当，应改为to put in my list；note和reminder应使用复数形式；notification应使用复数notifications。

× It can help me to avoid important.

✓ It can help me avoid forgetting important things.

avoid后应接动词-ing形式或名词，avoid important不完整，应补充完整表达。