List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes I do. Usually when my parents tell me to buy stuff for them, I usually make a list. For example, if they ask me to buy ingredient to cook, I will make a list that they want so that I won't be hesitate in the supermarket.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
I always make a list for my work, especially when I study something important. At first I thought it was not a very good idea because it seemed time consuming and I doubt it would be effective. However, after a few time tries I realized that it's really helped me.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think some people don't like making lists because they don't want to spend time writing everything down. For example, they might find it time consuming and prefer to start working immediately without hesitation. Moreover, some people might feel that making lists slow them down or interrupt their flow of ideas.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
In my opinion, I would rather write my list on my phone than paper because it is more environmentally friendly and convenient using Phonesafe paper and inks which help reduce waste. Also, I can easily access and edit my list anytime without carrying extra item.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'usually'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when my parents ask me to buy ingredients for cooking. This helps me avoid hesitation in the supermarket and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a few time tries' thành 'a few tries'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.
예시: I always make a list for my work, especially when studying important topics. At first, I thought it was time-consuming and ineffective, but after a few tries, I realized it really helps me stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 85.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể sử dụng thêm từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'some people'. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to begin tasks immediately. Additionally, they may feel that lists disrupt their creative flow or slow down their productivity.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 80.0제안: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu cú để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ 'using Phonesafe paper and inks' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy tập trung vào lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more environmentally friendly and convenient. I can easily access and edit my list anytime without needing to carry extra paper.
문법
× if they ask me to buy ingredient to cook
✓ if they ask me to buy ingredients to cook
The word 'ingredient' should be plural 'ingredients' because it refers to multiple items needed for cooking, not just one.
× I won't be hesitate in the supermarket
✓ I won't hesitate in the supermarket
The modal verb 'won't' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'hesitate', not the infinitive form 'be hesitate'.
× after a few time tries I realized that it's really helped me
✓ after a few tries I realized that it really helped me
The phrase 'a few time tries' is incorrect; it should be 'a few tries' because 'tries' is the plural noun and 'time' is unnecessary here. Also, 'it's really helped me' should be 'it really helped me' to match past tense context.
× convenient using Phonesafe paper and inks which help reduce waste
✓ convenient because it uses Phonesafe paper and inks which help reduce waste
The phrase 'convenient using' is incorrect; it should be 'convenient because it uses' to properly connect the ideas and use correct prepositions.
× without carrying extra item
✓ without carrying extra items
The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple possible things one might carry.
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