List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如"one shop"应为"when I shop"，且表达不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I enjoy the freedom of choosing things spontaneously, which makes shopping more exciting for me.

제안: 回答结构较好，但表达略显笨拙，"according to this"用法不当。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks more effectively and improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但"memorize their texts naturally"表达不够清晰，建议用更具体的词汇描述记忆方式。

예시: Some people find making lists boring because they prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down. Also, they feel that lists can restrict their creativity.

제안: 回答简洁且表达清晰，但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I believe that writing tasks down helps me remember them better.

× Now, I don't usually make a list one shop because I like buying things freely.

✓ Now, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I like buying things freely.

句中 'one shop' 应为 'when I shop'，这里是时间状语从句，使用 'when' 表示“当……时”，而不是 'one'。这是单复数和词语选择错误。

× I like making a list on paper because I think writing down these tasks on paper can help me to memorize better.

✓ I like making a list on paper because I think writing down these tasks on paper can help me memorize better.

动词 'help' 后面接动词时，通常不加 'to'，直接用动词原形。这里 'help me to memorize' 应改为 'help me memorize'。这是介词使用错误。