List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything, which saved me time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and improve my skills. For instance, by following my list, I can complete projects on time and avoid forgetting important duties.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và dùng ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything. However, this can lead to forgetting items and wasting time, so making a list is actually more efficient.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày rõ ràng sở thích của mình, giải thích lý do và so sánh ưu nhược điểm của từng phương pháp một cách logic.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. Although paper lists are easy to write on, I often lose them, so using my phone is more reliable.

× Yes, I find my colleagues when I go shopping is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I find making a list when I go shopping is very convenient.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'my colleagues' which is plural and unrelated to the context. The intended meaning is about making a list, which is singular. The correction replaces 'my colleagues' with 'making a list' to match the singular subject and context.

× I can buy everything and don't need to go to the supermarket after I find I forgot to buy something that's very convenient and I find it useful and.

✓ I can buy everything and don't need to go back to the supermarket after I realize I forgot to buy something. That's very convenient, and I find it useful.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and missing connectors. 'After I find I forgot' is awkward; 'after I realize I forgot' is clearer. Also, the sentence is split into two for clarity and proper punctuation.

× Yes, I think when I make this for my work, I can do everything and develop my skill and save time to do everything and I think it's useful and we can do it.

✓ Yes, I think when I make a list for my work, I can do everything, develop my skills, and save time. I think it's useful and we can do it.

'Make this' is vague; 'make a list' is clearer. 'Develop my skill' should be plural 'skills' to indicate multiple abilities. The sentence is also improved by adding commas and splitting for clarity.

× Because they think they will remember and buy something easily, but I think they need to improve that skill to buy something when made less because it's very clear and they can save time.

✓ Because they think they will remember and buy things easily, but I think they need to improve that skill to buy fewer things because it's very clear and they can save time.

'Buy something when made less' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'buy fewer things' to indicate quantity. Also, 'something' is singular but context implies plural 'things'.

× I make this on my phone because I can bring it everywhere and it's so convenient, then use paper because I can bring it and write on it and take away. But when you use paper I can't find it.

✓ I make my list on my phone because I can bring it everywhere and it's very convenient. I also use paper because I can write on it and take it with me. But when I use paper, I sometimes can't find it.

'Make this' is vague; 'make my list' is clearer. The sentence structure is improved for clarity. 'Then use paper' is incomplete; it should be 'I also use paper'. 'Take away' is replaced with 'take it with me' for natural expression. Pronouns are corrected for consistency.