List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas, namun ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat seperti "finds me easier" yang seharusnya "makes it easier for me". Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan perhatikan struktur kalimat agar lebih efektif dan natural.

예시: I usually make a checklist before shopping and organize the items into categories such as fruits, vegetables, and household products. This method makes it easier for me to find everything quickly and avoid forgetting anything. It also helps me save time and stay focused while shopping.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah menjawab pertanyaan, tetapi penggunaan kata pengisi seperti "UMM" terlalu sering dan mengganggu kelancaran berbicara. Selain itu, ada kesalahan tata bahasa seperti "prioritize my task" seharusnya "prioritize my tasks". Cobalah untuk mengurangi pengisi kata dan memperbaiki tata bahasa agar lebih lancar dan tepat.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively. For example, by writing down my tasks, I can focus on the most important jobs and avoid forgetting others.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta kalimat yang tidak lengkap sehingga sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan jelas dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban lebih koheren dan mudah dimengerti.

예시: Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they already know what they want to do and enjoy being spontaneous. They might feel that having a list limits their freedom. For example, they prefer to make plans as they go rather than following a fixed schedule.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik namun ada kesalahan tata bahasa seperti "it easier" seharusnya "it's easier" dan penggunaan kata pengisi "Umm" yang sebaiknya dikurangi. Cobalah untuk memperbaiki tata bahasa dan membuat kalimat lebih lancar dan natural.

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because it's easier for me to organize my thoughts that way. By writing down my thoughts, I remember them better. However, sometimes I forget to bring my To Do List notebook with me.

× This method finds me easier to get everything quickly and avoid forgetting anything.

✓ This method makes it easier for me to get everything quickly and avoid forgetting anything.

The verb 'finds' is incorrectly used with 'me easier to get'. The correct structure is 'make it easier for someone to do something'. So, 'This method makes it easier for me to get everything quickly and avoid forgetting anything.' is correct.

× I usually make a checklist before shopping and organize them by the categories such as fruits, vegetables and household products.

✓ I usually make a checklist before shopping and organize it by categories such as fruits, vegetables, and household products.

The word 'checklist' is singular, so the pronoun referring to it should be singular 'it' instead of 'them'. Also, 'categories' is plural, so 'the categories' is acceptable, but 'by categories' is more natural here.

× Yes, I make a list for my work UMM because it helps me to stay organized and prioritize my task effectively.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks that need prioritizing.

× Umm for example, by writing it down my task I can focus on my important job and avoid forgetting other tasks.

✓ Umm, for example, by writing down my tasks, I can focus on my important jobs and avoid forgetting other tasks.

The phrase 'writing it down my task' is incorrect; it should be 'writing down my tasks'. Also, 'important job' should be plural 'important jobs' to match the context.

× They might be thing that having at least limit their freedom.

✓ They might think that having a list limits their freedom.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct sentence uses 'think' instead of 'thing', and 'having a list limits their freedom' is the proper structure.

× For example they are really like have a plan as they go rather than.

✓ For example, they really like to have a plan as they go rather than making a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'to have' and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my paper rather than my phone because it easier for me to organize my thought that way.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because it is easier for me to organize my thoughts that way.

'Paper' is uncountable here, so 'my paper' is unnatural; 'on paper' is correct. Also, 'it easier' needs the verb 'is'. 'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'.

× Umm and by writing down my thoughts, it made me remember better.

✓ Umm, and by writing down my thoughts, it helps me remember better.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'made'. Also, 'remember better' is correct without 'me' after 'helps'.