List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, every time I go shopping I make a list because sometimes I forget what to buy and keeping a list makes me remember the things I need to buy.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I always make a list before I work. It helps me to remember the tests I need to do. And it makes me more productive.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think the reason for that is some people don't like to follow the order and they want to plan their day as time goes.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer making list on my phone umm because it's umm easier and I don't need to carry notes everywhere because my phone is all the time at my hand and it's easier to delete and add some tasks.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 80.0제안: Cavabınız təbii və məntiqlidir, amma təkrarlardan qaçınmaq üçün ifadələri daha qısa və dəqiq etmək faydalı olar. Məsələn, "I make a list every time I shop to help me remember what to buy." kimi daha sadə və effektiv cümlələr istifadə edin.
예시: I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need, preventing me from forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 85.0제안: Cavabınız aydın və məqsədəuyğundur, lakin cümlələri birləşdirərək daha axıcı və təbii ifadə edə bilərsiniz. Məsələn, "I always make a list before work because it helps me remember the tasks and increases my productivity."
예시: I always prepare a list before starting work as it helps me keep track of my tasks and boosts my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 75.0제안: Cümlənizdə qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə qarışıqlığı var. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadə üçün "Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to plan their day spontaneously rather than following a fixed order." kimi ifadə istifadə edin.
예시: Some people avoid making lists because they prefer to organize their day flexibly instead of sticking to a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: Cavabınızda çoxlu "umm" kimi sözlər var, bu da təbii danışığı azaldır. Daha qısa və aydın ifadə üçün "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to edit." kimi ifadə istifadə edin.
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone since it's always with me and allows me to easily add or remove tasks.
문법
× I think the reason for that is some people don't like to follow the order and they want to plan their day as time goes.
✓ I think the reason for that is some people don't like to follow the order and they want to plan their day as time goes by.
The phrase 'as time goes' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'as time goes by,' which means as time passes. This is a common idiomatic expression in English.
× I prefer making list on my phone umm because it's umm easier and I don't need to carry notes everywhere because my phone is all the time at my hand and it's easier to delete and add some tasks.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone umm because it's umm easier and I don't need to carry notes everywhere because my phone is always in my hand and it's easier to delete and add some tasks.
The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'all the time at my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'always in my hand.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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