List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な文を作り、冗長な表現を避けましょう。例えば、"I often make a shopping list because I tend to forget what and where to buy items."のように、主題文と理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because I tend to forget what items I need and where to buy them.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に不正確です。質問に直接答え、理由や効果を明確に述べることが必要です。例えば、"Yes, I make lists for my work and studying because they help me stay organized and focused."のように簡潔に表現しましょう。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work and studying because they help me stay organized and focused.

제안: 内容が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を具体的に述べ、論理的に説明しましょう。例えば、"Some people dislike making lists because they find it confusing or time-consuming."のように簡潔に述べることが大切です。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it confusing or time-consuming.

제안: 回答は比較的明確ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。接続詞を適切に使い、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。例えば、"I prefer making lists on my phone because I sometimes lose paper lists and forget items, and using my phone is very convenient."のように表現できます。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I sometimes lose paper lists and forget items, and using my phone is very convenient.

× Yes, I make I often make a list for when I was I'm going to shopping and because I I often forgot to what to buy and where to buy that them so I can remember.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I am going shopping because I often forget what to buy and where to buy them so I can remember.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tenses and has redundant words. 'I was' should be 'I am' to match the present continuous tense for future plans. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'that them' is incorrect; 'them' alone is sufficient. The sentence is corrected to maintain proper present tense and clarity.

× Yes, I make I often make a list for when I was I'm going to shopping and because I I often forgot to what to buy and where to buy that them so I can remember.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I am going shopping because I often forget what to buy and where to buy them so I can remember.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'going shopping' without 'to'. This correction improves the natural use of prepositions in English.

× I often make a list for my work, some speech or some something site that like studying for examination and so because making a list is made me study.

✓ I often make a list for my work, such as speeches or study materials for examinations, because making a list helps me study.

The phrase 'is made me study' incorrectly uses past tense 'made' with 'is'. It should be 'helps' to indicate present tense and habitual action. Also, 'some speech or some something site that like studying for examination' is unclear and corrected to 'such as speeches or study materials for examinations' for clarity.

× For some people, making Glazed made them confused. Confused.

✓ For some people, making lists makes them confused.

'Making Glazed' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'making lists'. Also, 'made them confused' should be 'makes them confused' to indicate a general truth in present tense. Repetition of 'Confused' is unnecessary and removed.

× For example, they can't remember how to, they can't understand how to buy innovative. Buy them and it would cost me.

✓ For example, they can't remember how to buy innovative items, and they worry it would cost them.

The sentence has unclear pronoun references and incomplete clauses. 'Buy innovative' is incomplete; 'innovative items' clarifies meaning. 'It would cost me' should be 'it would cost them' to match the subject 'they'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and pronoun agreement.

× I would like to make a list on my phone. I have two reasons for this opinion. And 1st, making a pay paper some sometimes I lost paper and I forgot what to buy.

✓ I would like to make a list on my phone. I have two reasons for this opinion. First, when making a list on paper, sometimes I lose the paper and forget what to buy.

'Making a pay paper' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list on paper'. 'Sometimes I lost paper' should be 'sometimes I lose the paper' to maintain present tense and include the definite article 'the' before 'paper'. These corrections improve preposition and article usage.

× And 1st, making a pay paper some sometimes I lost paper and I forgot what to buy.

✓ First, when making a list on paper, sometimes I lose the paper and forget what to buy.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented. Replacing 'And 1st' with 'First' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and formality.