List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh dùng từ lặp lại và cố gắng sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tự nhiên hơn.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy whatever I feel like at the moment.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi sai và dùng từ chính xác, đồng thời sắp xếp câu hợp lý để ý tưởng mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my study tasks because it helps me organize my assignments. I have been doing this since middle school, and it really improves my productivity.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they want to feel free and do things spontaneously without following a strict plan.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi sai và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giải thích rõ lý do lựa chọn của bạn.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient since I use my phone all the time.

× Well, I might say that not actually.

✓ Well, I might say that not actually.

The sentence is awkward but does not contain a modal verb error. No correction needed here.

× I don't have a habit to make a list when I shop.

✓ I don't have a habit of making a list when I shop.

The phrase 'have a habit to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' followed by a gerund form 'making'. This is a common collocation in English.

× I just wanna buy anything or just want to do the shopping anything I like.

✓ I just want to buy anything or just want to do the shopping for anything I like.

The sentence is unclear and missing prepositions. Adding 'for' clarifies the object of shopping. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× Yes, obviously I always make a list from my study work to help me to do everything.

✓ Yes, obviously I always make a list for my study work to help me do everything.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose. Also, 'help me to do' can be simplified to 'help me do'.

× Every assignments and homeworks are Titanic is really necessary to do and it works.

✓ Every assignment and homework is really necessary to do and it works.

'Every' is followed by singular nouns, so 'assignments' and 'homeworks' should be singular 'assignment' and 'homework'. Also, 'Titanic' is likely a misheard word and removed for clarity.

× I have made a leak since I was in middle school and it always work and helped me to do better works.

✓ I have made a list since I was in middle school and it always works and helps me do better work.

'Leak' is a typo for 'list'. 'Work' is uncountable here, so 'works' is incorrect. Also, subject-verb agreement corrected to 'works' and 'helps'.

× Well, from my perspective, I think that big because people they don't want to like they just wanted to become freedom, do whatever they want.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I think that is because people just want to be free and do whatever they want.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect verb forms. 'They don't want to like' is unclear and corrected to 'just want to be free'. 'Become freedom' is incorrect; 'be free' is correct.

× They just don't want to be like in a mood and try to do everything that had been least first, so.

✓ They just don't want to be in a mood where they have to try to do everything that has been listed first.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect conjunctions and phrases. 'Be like in a mood' is incorrect; 'be in a mood' is correct. 'Had been least first' is likely 'had been listed first'.

× Actually on my phone mostly because taking some notes or leaks on my phone is quite fast and convenient for me because I always on my screen time 24/7 so I always just taking notes or making lists on my phone.

✓ Actually, mostly on my phone because taking some notes or lists on my phone is quite fast and convenient for me since I am always on my screen 24/7, so I always just take notes or make lists on my phone.

Prepositions and verb forms are incorrect. 'Leaks' should be 'lists'. 'I always on my screen time' is missing verb 'am'. Verb forms corrected to 'take' and 'make' for habitual actions.