List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和单复数形式，避免重复。

예시: I usually make a shopping list when I am busy with study or work because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting items.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并具体说明清单如何帮助工作安排。

예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list at work because it helps me prioritize urgent tasks and manage my time effectively.

제안: 表达不流畅且含糊，建议明确表达观点，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their creativity or they prefer to work spontaneously without strict plans.

제안: 回答重复且语法错误较多，建议简洁表达偏好并说明理由，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and it's convenient to check and update my tasks anytime.

× In that cases I I need to have a list.

✓ In those cases I need to have a list.

这里的 'cases' 是复数，前面的指示代词应该用复数形式 'those'，而不是 'that'。这是单复数搭配错误。

× When I am busy in study or work, I have no time to struggle for shopping with my friends.

✓ When I am busy studying or working, I have no time to struggle with shopping with my friends.

'busy in study or work' 应改为 'busy studying or working'，因为 'busy' 后面通常接动名词形式。'struggle for shopping' 应改为 'struggle with shopping'，介词用法错误。

× Maybe they are not. In terms with their workload or maybe they are having some creative work so making a list maybe instruct their creativity and the fresh idea they.

✓ Maybe they are not, in terms of their workload, or maybe they have some creative work, so making a list may restrict their creativity and fresh ideas.

'Maybe they are not.' 句子不完整，缺少谓语。'In terms with' 应为 'in terms of'，介词搭配错误。'maybe instruct their creativity and the fresh idea they' 语序和用词错误，应为 'may restrict their creativity and fresh ideas'。

× For me, I prefer to make it make it make a list of four because I usually bring my phones and it is easy for me to check whether I have done the list to do all.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually bring my phone and it is easy for me to check whether I have completed all the tasks on the list.

重复的 'make it' 是多余的。'make a list of four' 语义不清，应为 'make a list on my phone'。'bring my phones' 应为单数 'phone'。'check whether I have done the list to do all' 语序和表达不当，应改为 'check whether I have completed all the tasks on the list'。

× Is there anything I forgot easily to?

✓ Is there anything I easily forget?

'forgot' 是过去式，句子时态应为一般现在时，且 'to' 多余。应改为 'Is there anything I easily forget?'。