List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'that I am not a person who have' và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn làm danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I have a poor memory. Therefore, making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến thì động từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'has not really good memory' nên sửa thành 'don't have a good memory'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ hiệu quả của việc làm danh sách.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I don't have a good memory. This method helps me stay organized and saves both time and money by preventing mistakes.

제안: Bạn cần sửa lỗi từ vựng như 'make a lead' thành 'make a list' và dùng câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và giải thích cụ thể hơn lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. However, I believe making a list is necessary to avoid forgetting important things and to save time and money.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có câu bị bỏ dở. Hãy hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very portable and I always remember to bring it with me. This way, it's more convenient than carrying paper lists.

× I think I'll need to make a list when I shop because that I am not a person who have a good memory and I think it's necessary to buy enough.

✓ I think I'll need to make a list when I shop because I am not a person who has a good memory and I think it's necessary to buy enough.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'a person'. It should be 'has' to match the singular subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I always make a list for all my work because I am a person who has not really good memory and I think it's necessary because it's helped me to save both the time and money.

✓ I always make a list for all my work because I am a person who does not have a really good memory and I think it's necessary because it helps me save both time and money.

The phrase 'has not really good memory' is incorrect; it should be 'does not have a really good memory' to properly negate possession. Also, 'it's helped me' should be 'it helps me' to maintain present tense consistency. This involves incorrect pronoun use and tense errors.

× I think that they don't want to spend time to make a lead, but I think it's necessary to ensure that they don't forget the important thing and it's a safe time and money.

✓ I think that they don't want to spend time making a list, but I think it's necessary to ensure that they don't forget important things and it saves time and money.

The phrase 'spend time to make a lead' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'spend time making a list'. Also, 'the important thing' should be plural 'important things' to be general. 'It's a safe time and money' is incorrect; it should be 'it saves time and money'. These are preposition and word choice errors.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is very portable and I think I always remember to bring it instead of a paper. I think it's more convenient and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is very portable and I think I always remember to bring it instead of paper. I think it's more convenient.

The sentence ends with 'and.' which is incomplete and incorrect. Also, 'a paper' should be 'paper' as an uncountable noun here. The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used at the end, causing sentence structure errors.