List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to reduce the use of fillers like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, aim to complete your sentences fully and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide a concise, direct answer with supporting details.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Otherwise, I might end up buying unnecessary items. Making a list is a practical habit that saves time and money.

제안: Avoid using fillers and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reason with linking words. Try to expand your answer slightly to show your ability to develop ideas coherently.

예시: No, I don't make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things flexible. However, I know that making lists can save time and improve organisation for many people.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid vague expressions like 'maybe' repeatedly.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to focus on their tasks without distractions. Also, they might have enough time to remember everything without needing a list.

제안: Complete your sentences fully and avoid fillers. Provide reasons to support your preference using linking words. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to edit. Additionally, I can access my list anytime without carrying extra paper.

× Yes, umm, actually it is quite a good method to remember things.

✓ Yes, umm, actually, it is quite a good method to remember things.

A comma is needed after 'actually' to separate the introductory adverb from the rest of the sentence, improving clarity and flow.

× Uh, because, uh, if we don't, uh, make a list, then probably we purchase unusual things.

✓ Because if we don't make a list, then we probably purchase unusual things.

Starting a sentence with 'because' is acceptable here, but the multiple 'uh's and commas disrupt the sentence structure. Removing filler words and unnecessary commas clarifies the sentence.

× That's why it's a good habit to make a list and I use the.

✓ That's why it's a good habit to make a list, and I use it.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and adding a comma before 'and' connects the two independent clauses properly.

× making a list is a very good habit to save times.

✓ Making a list is a very good habit to save time.

The word 'time' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised as 'times' in this context.

× Maybe it's their personal choice, so maybe they are uh, more concentrated for their works and they have enough time to.

✓ Maybe it's their personal choice, so maybe they are more focused on their work and have enough time to do so.

'Concentrated' is incorrect here; 'focused' is the correct adjective. Also, 'works' should be singular 'work' as it refers to tasks in general. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.

× I prefer on my phone because it is very convenient, uh, to.

✓ I prefer to use my phone because it is very convenient.

The phrase 'prefer on my phone' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'prefer to use my phone'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed completion.