List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多重复和语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

제안: 回答较为简短且有重复，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节以增强表达效果。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before starting my assignments because it helps me organize my tasks and work more efficiently.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and prefer to rely on their memory and intuition instead.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，使用正确的时态和句式，并增加连接词使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because as a student, I often write things down with a pen, and I enjoy the feel of writing on paper.

× Yes, I make a list when when I, when I were go shopping, it's a, it's a, it's allow me to not forget something.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping, it allows me to not forget something.

句中 'when I were go shopping' 中 'were' 用法错误，正确应为 'go' 的一般现在时，因为描述的是习惯性动作。同时 'it's allow' 应改为 'it allows'，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加 -s。

× it's a, it's a, it's allow me to not forget something.

✓ it allows me to not forget something.

主语 'it' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故 'allow' 应改为 'allows'。

× Because they think list is a kind of restrict Restrict they prefer to do something by their memory and in into intuition.

✓ Because they think a list is a kind of restriction. They prefer to do something by their memory and intuition.

'list' 是可数名词，前面应加冠词 'a'。'restrict' 用作名词不正确，应改为名词 'restriction'。另外，'in into' 是错误的介词搭配，应去掉 'in'。

× Because they think list is a kind of restrict Restrict they prefer to do something by their memory and in into intuition.

✓ Because they think a list is a kind of restriction. They prefer to do something by their memory and intuition.

'in into' 是错误的介词搭配，应去掉 'in'，只用 'intuition' 前不加介词。

× So they don't like make list.

✓ So they don't like to make a list.

动词 'like' 后应接不定式 'to make'，且 'list' 是可数名词，前面应加冠词 'a'。

× I prefer make a list on paper because I am a student now so I am I am right down with my pen many times and I like I like the texture of writing with the pen.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I am a student now, so I write down with my pen many times and I like the texture of writing with the pen.

'prefer' 后应接不定式 'to make'。'I am I am right down' 结构错误，应改为 'I write down'。