List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Mejora la claridad y la estructura de tu respuesta. Debes responder directamente a la pregunta con una oración clara y luego agregar detalles específicos. Evita frases incompletas y errores gramaticales. Por ejemplo, explica cómo hacer una lista te ayuda a no olvidar cosas y a organizarte mejor.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

제안: Debes expresar tus ideas con mayor claridad y coherencia. Responde directamente y explica cómo la lista te ayuda en el trabajo. Usa conectores para que la respuesta sea lógica y fluida.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

제안: Tu respuesta es confusa y no responde claramente a la pregunta. Debes expresar una opinión clara y dar razones específicas por las que algunas personas no les gusta hacer listas. Evita muletillas y frases incompletas.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel that it limits their flexibility during the day.

제안: Tu respuesta no está completa y es difícil de entender. Debes responder claramente cuál prefieres y explicar por qué, usando oraciones completas y vocabulario adecuado.

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy writing by hand, and it helps me organize my thoughts better.

× Yes, I always make a list when a shop because I think I'm organized more and. No. Forget.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think I'm more organized and don't forget anything.

The original sentence has a singular/plural issue with 'a shop' which should be 'I shop' (pronoun and verb). Also, the phrase 'I'm organized more and. No. Forget.' is fragmented and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the singular/plural and sentence structure.

× Yes, I always make a list for work because I don't know I think. I think I help me.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for work because I think it helps me.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'I think I help me' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it helps me' to correctly refer to the list helping the speaker.

× Umm, I think though some people like making a list. Umm, I don't know. For example, when you're writing down make a listen list, I feel very.

✓ Umm, I think some people don't like making a list. Umm, I don't know. For example, when you're writing down a list, I feel very organized.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and unclear phrases like 'make a listen list' and incomplete thoughts. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I prefer make a list on paper because I like writing and I feel when when I say where do you organize it?

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like writing and I feel more organized when I do so.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'prefer make' instead of 'prefer to make'. Also, the latter part is unclear and fragmented. The correction uses the correct verb form and clarifies the meaning.