List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并加入连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me prepare what I need. Moreover, supermarkets are usually very large, so having a list makes it easier and more efficient to find items.

제안: 回答较为完整，但可以使用更多连接词来增强逻辑性，同时丰富细节，使表达更具体。

예시: Yes, I regularly make a work list because it helps me focus on my next tasks. Additionally, it allows me to prepare for the following day, which improves my concentration and productivity.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容较少。建议使用更自然的表达方式，增加具体原因，并使用连接词。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because it can make them feel stressed. For example, they might feel pressured to complete all the tasks they wrote down.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议重组句子，补充完整信息，使用正确的语法和连接词。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because I carry my phone everywhere. This way, I can check my list anytime, which is very convenient in today's society where everyone has a phone.

× I think this method is more efficiently and convenient in the supermarket because supermarkets usually very big and hard to find what I need.

✓ I think this method is more efficient and convenient in the supermarket because supermarkets are usually very big and it is hard to find what I need.

这里“more efficiently”是副词，应该用形容词“more efficient”来修饰“method”。另外，句子中缺少动词“are”，导致句子不完整。建议使用“are usually very big”来表达超市通常很大。

× supermarkets usually very big and hard to find what I need.

✓ supermarkets are usually very big and it is hard to find what I need.

“supermarkets usually very big”缺少系动词“are”，正确表达应为“supermarkets are usually very big”。此外，“hard to find what I need”前应加主语“it is”使句子完整。

× I considered that some people don't like making lists for several reason.

✓ I consider that some people don't like making lists for several reasons.

“reason”应使用复数形式“reasons”，因为前面用了“several”表示多个原因。

× making lists may let them feel stressful because they need to do what they make, a list.

✓ making lists may make them feel stressed because they need to do what they make, a list.

“let them feel stressful”用法错误，应该用“make them feel stressed”，因为“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人有压力的”，而“stressed”表示“感到有压力的”。

× I personally prefer to make a list on my rather than on paper because I take my everyday so that I can watch a list wherever I am.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I take my phone every day so that I can check a list wherever I am.

“my”后缺少名词，应为“my phone”。“take my everyday”缺少名词，应为“take my phone every day”。“watch a list”用词不当，应该用“check a list”表示查看清单。

× in modern society everybody have a phone.

✓ in modern society everybody has a phone.

“everybody”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。

× Overall, I prefer to make list on.

✓ Overall, I prefer to make a list on my phone.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语“my phone”，使句子完整通顺。