List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多的犹豫词和重复，表达不够流畅自然。建议减少口头语，使用更简洁明确的句子结构，并且可以适当增加细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list in my mind before shopping. This helps me finish quickly when I go to the supermarket.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议理清句子结构，避免重复，并且详细说明为什么列表有时不起作用。

예시: Yes, I make a list every morning of tasks I need to complete. However, sometimes it doesn't work because I get distracted and can't focus on my work.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they want to stay flexible and prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达偏好和原因，并避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to rearrange items. Using my phone distracts me sometimes.

× S uh, I will say yes, sometimes I shop I will, I will list in my mind and when I go to the supermarket I will, uh, quickly finish shopping.

✓ S uh, I would say yes. Sometimes when I shop, I list in my mind, and when I go to the supermarket, I quickly finish shopping.

这里的“will”用法不当，表达习惯上用“would say”表示委婉回答，且不需要重复使用“will”表示将来时，改为一般现在时更合适。建议简化句子结构，避免多余的“will”。

× Yes, I make this for my work in the morning. I will list what I need to do for work every day, but sometimes it doesn't work because my because I will. I cannot focus on my working and the latest.

✓ Yes, I make this list for my work in the morning. I list what I need to do for work every day, but sometimes it doesn't work because I cannot focus on my work and the latest tasks.

“I will list”用法不当，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“I list”。“my working”应改为“my work”，更符合表达习惯。句子中“because my because I will”结构混乱，应简化。

× I think it's maybe they want to be flexible or they don't want to like be stretch from the list and they can do something they want at the moment.

✓ I think maybe they want to be flexible or they don't want to be restricted by the list so they can do something they want at the moment.

“be stretch from the list”用法错误，正确表达应为“be restricted by the list”，表示被限制。介词“from”用错，应使用“by”。

× I will choose make a list on paper instead of on my phone because on paper I can easily move my list. Is it to move my list and my in my phone I will distract?

✓ I would choose to make a list on paper instead of on my phone because on paper I can easily move my list. On my phone, I get distracted.

“I will choose”用法不当，表达偏好时用“would choose”更合适。动词“make”前缺少不定式“to”。“Is it to move my list and my in my phone I will distract?”句子结构混乱，改为“On my phone, I get distracted.”更清晰。