List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 문장을 간결하게 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually make a shopping list using Pinterest because it helps me find creative ideas for online shopping.'처럼 말하면 더 효과적입니다.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list using Pinterest because it helps me find creative ideas for online shopping.

제안: 답변을 더 명확하고 논리적으로 연결하세요. 예를 들어, 'I use Notion to organize my work and plans, and it works well because it helps me stay organized and efficient.'처럼 말하면 좋습니다.

예시: I use Notion to organize my work and plans, and it works well because it helps me stay organized and efficient.

제안: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하며, 의견을 명확하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'Some people dislike making lists because of their personality, but I find it very useful.'라고 말하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because of their personality, but I find it very useful.

제안: 답변을 더 간결하고 명확하게 하며, 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer making lists on my phone using Notion because it has automatic features that make organizing easier.'라고 말하면 좋습니다.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone using Notion because it has automatic features that make organizing easier.

× Umm I use the Pinterest which is the platform for searching many ideas like creative stuffs.

✓ Umm I use Pinterest which is a platform for searching many ideas like creative stuff.

'Pinterest' is a proper noun and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× This way I used to make a list for my work which is the platform of Notion which is the organizing stuff for the work and plans.

✓ This way I used to make a list for my work using Notion, which is a platform for organizing work and plans.

The phrase 'the platform of Notion' is incorrect; it should be 'using Notion' or 'with Notion'. Also, 'the organizing stuff' is awkward; 'a platform for organizing work and plans' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think the reason why some people hate making lists is depends on their personality and characters.

✓ I think the reason why some people hate making lists depends on their personality and character.

The verb 'depends' should not be preceded by 'is'. Also, 'characters' should be singular 'character' when referring to personality traits collectively.

× But for me I think I it is very suitful suit for me so I don't get why they hated a lot too much.

✓ But for me, I think it is very suitable for me, so I don't understand why they hate it so much.

'Suitful' is not a correct word; the correct adjective is 'suitable'. The phrase 'I it is' is incorrect and should be 'it is'. Also, 'hated a lot too much' is awkward; 'hate it so much' is appropriate.

× As I told you just before, I prefer to make a plan in motion which is a platform for organizing my ideas and some works.

✓ As I told you just before, I prefer to make a plan in Notion, which is a platform for organizing my ideas and some work.

The phrase 'make a plan in motion' is incorrect; it should be 'make a plan in Notion' referring to the platform. Also, 'works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun here.

× I think it is more convenient because they have an automatic features on it.

✓ I think it is more convenient because it has automatic features on it.

'They have an automatic features' is incorrect because 'features' is plural and should not be preceded by 'an'. Also, 'they' should be 'it' referring to the platform.