List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating words like "while" and focus on delivering a clear, natural response. Also, adding linking words can improve coherence. For example, you could say, "No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I'm an impulsive buyer. When I'm in the store, I tend to live in the moment and think about what I want to eat later or why I might need certain items."

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I'm an impulsive buyer. When I'm in the store, I tend to live in the moment and think about what I want to eat later or why I might need certain items.

제안: Your answer has some hesitation and repetition, which affects fluency. Try to speak more smoothly and structure your answer with clear linking words. For example, you could say, "I don't make a list for my work because we follow a daily routine. However, I believe that occasionally changing the routine can help improve results."

예시: I don't make a list for my work because we follow a daily routine. However, I believe that occasionally changing the routine can help improve results.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use correct plural forms and avoid repeating phrases. Also, adding linking words can improve clarity. For example, "I think some people are less organized than others, and they prefer to keep things spontaneous and fun so they can live in the moment and enjoy life."

예시: I think some people are less organized than others, and they prefer to keep things spontaneous and fun so they can live in the moment and enjoy life.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects coherence and effectiveness. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "If I had to make a list, I would prefer to use my phone because it's easier to access and update the list anytime. This convenience makes it more practical than using paper."

예시: If I had to make a list, I would prefer to use my phone because it's easier to access and update the list anytime. This convenience makes it more practical than using paper.

× No, I do not make a list while while I go for shopping because I'm an impulsive buyer and at the time when I'm in the shop I'm living in the moment.

✓ No, I do not make a list while I am shopping because I'm an impulsive buyer and at the time when I'm in the shop I'm living in the moment.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'am shopping' or 'go shopping'. Using 'while I am shopping' correctly expresses the ongoing action during shopping.

× I think some peoples are not are not as organized as other people and they like to keep it raw and fun for them to live in the moment and enjoy life.

✓ I think some people are not as organized as other people and they like to keep it raw and fun for them to live in the moment and enjoy life.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect when referring to some individuals; 'people' is the correct plural form for persons.

× If I had to make a list, I would prefer on my phone because I would be able to access the list and improve it as. However, I would like to and it would be a lot easier for me to access that.

✓ If I had to make a list, I would prefer to do it on my phone because I would be able to access the list and improve it easily. It would be a lot easier for me to access that.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. Adding 'to do it' clarifies the preference, and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.