List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'I'm a I'll make' and 'interested of it'. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing a clear reason. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and repeated words like 'I'll I'll'.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I'm quite easy-going and prefer to buy things spontaneously when I find something interesting.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit unclear and contains filler sounds like 'MMM'. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how making lists helps you manage time effectively.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks better and manage my time more efficiently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat negative and lacks clarity. Avoid making assumptions like calling people 'lazy'. Instead, provide a more balanced opinion with clear reasons. Also, correct grammar errors such as 'they'd rather doing' to 'they'd rather do'.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to start tasks immediately without planning.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by explaining why making lists on your phone motivates you. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and having the list accessible motivates me to complete my tasks efficiently.

× I don't think I'm a I'll make a list when I shop because I think I'm a easy going person.

✓ I don't think I'll make a list when I shop because I think I'm an easy-going person.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'I'm a' and 'I'll' which is grammatically incorrect. Also, 'a easy going person' should be 'an easy-going person' because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound and 'easy-going' is hyphenated as a compound adjective.

× So I'll I'll buy some stuff when I'm when I'm interested of it.

✓ So I'll buy some stuff when I'm interested in it.

The phrase 'interested of it' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'interested' is 'in'. Also, the repeated 'I'll' and 'when I'm' are redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× I usually make a list for my work because I think making a list can make me more easy to implement stuff that I can.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because I think making a list can make it easier for me to implement tasks.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. Also, 'implement stuff that I can' is unclear and awkward; 'implement tasks' is clearer and more appropriate.

× Yeah, easily for me to manage time.

✓ Yeah, it's easier for me to manage my time.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'it's' completes the sentence. Also, 'manage time' is better expressed as 'manage my time' for clarity.

× I don't know much of that about it.

✓ I don't know much about it.

The phrase 'much of that about it' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'much about it' to convey lack of knowledge.

× They'd rather doing the actual action instead of making a list before because it is quite time consuming.

✓ They'd rather do the actual action instead of making a list beforehand because it is quite time-consuming.

After 'would rather', the base form of the verb should be used ('do' not 'doing'). Also, 'before' should be 'beforehand' to indicate prior action, and 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I would make a list on my phone because I think it is motivated.

✓ I would make a list on my phone because I think it motivates me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it is motivated' which is passive and unclear. The intended meaning is that the list motivates the speaker, so the active form 'it motivates me' is correct.