List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak bazı ifadeler daha akıcı ve doğru hale getirilebilir. Örneğin, 'I just buy what I need only with looking at the list' ifadesi yerine 'I only buy what I need by looking at the list' daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde gereksiz tekrarlar var, bunları azaltarak daha etkili cevaplar verebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it's hard to remember everything I need. I quickly jot down the items before leaving the house, and then I only buy what's on the list.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçiminde yanlışlıklar var. Örneğin, 'I always do a list what I have to do in that day' yerine 'I always make a list of what I have to do that day' daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, 'I just following the list and do my duties' ifadesi 'I just follow the list and complete my tasks' şeklinde düzeltilmeli. Bu tür hataları düzeltmek için dilbilgisi kurallarına dikkat edin.

예시: Yes, I make a list for work because we have tasks that shouldn't be forgotten. I always make a list of what I have to do that day and follow it to complete my tasks.

제안: Cümle yapılarınızda ve kelime seçiminde bazı hatalar var. Örneğin, 'Making lists is just make our lives way more easier' ifadesi 'Making lists just makes our lives much easier' olmalı. Ayrıca, 'people who don't make a list is they're memorizing' ifadesi 'people who don't make lists are memorizing' şeklinde düzeltilmeli. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

예시: I don't understand why some people dislike making lists because I find them very helpful. Making lists just makes our lives much easier. Perhaps those who don't make lists prefer to memorize their tasks instead.

제안: Cümlelerinizde bazı dilbilgisi ve ifade hataları var. Örneğin, 'phone is, I think, more easy' yerine 'phone is, I think, easier' demelisiniz. Ayrıca, 'You can just make a cross and in everywhere I go, I just go with the phone' ifadesi daha doğal olarak 'You can just cross off items, and I always carry my phone wherever I go' şeklinde olmalı. Daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın.

예시: I use both paper and my phone for making lists, but mostly my phone because it's easier. There are many apps available, and I can easily cross off items. I always carry my phone wherever I go, so it's very convenient.

× So I always do a quick list before I go out from the house and I just buy what I need only with looking at the list.

✓ So I always make a quick list before I leave the house and I just buy what I need by looking at the list.

The phrase 'do a quick list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'go out from the house' is awkward; 'leave the house' is more natural. 'With looking at the list' should be 'by looking at the list' to indicate the method used.

× So I always do a list what I have to do in that day and I just following the list and do my duties.

✓ So I always make a list of what I have to do that day and I just follow the list and do my duties.

Again, 'do a list' should be 'make a list'. The phrase 'a list what I have to do' is incorrect; it should be 'a list of what I have to do'. 'In that day' is better as 'that day'. 'I just following' should be 'I just follow' to maintain correct verb form.

× Making lists is just make our lives way more easier.

✓ Making lists just makes our lives way easier.

'Making lists is just make' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'Making lists', so 'makes' is correct. Also, 'more easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone suffices.

× But I think that people who don't make a list is they're memorizing everything that they have to do.

✓ But I think that people who don't make a list are memorizing everything that they have to do.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'is they're' is incorrect; it should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× But I think I mostly use phone because phone is, I think, more easy.

✓ But I think I mostly use my phone because the phone is, I think, easier.

'Phone' as a countable noun requires an article or possessive pronoun: 'my phone' or 'the phone'. 'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'.

× So it's just easy to bring it to.

✓ So it's just easy to bring it along.

'Bring it to' is incomplete and incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'bring it along' to indicate carrying something with you.