List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'wrist'는 'list'로 수정해야 하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 중복된 단어('I I')를 피하고, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because if I don't, I tend to buy too many unnecessary items.

제안: 답변이 간단하고 반복적입니다. 질문에 직접 답변하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it time-consuming, and I prefer to keep things flexible.

제안: 답변이 이해하기 어렵고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 질문에 맞는 명확한 이유를 제시하고, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it can be tiring and requires a lot of effort to organize tasks.

제안: 답변이 반복적이고 자연스럽지 않습니다. 이유를 명확하고 구체적으로 설명하며, 문장 구조를 개선하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or check them anytime.

× Yes, I I sometimes make a wrist because if I didn't make a wrist I buy something too many.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make a list because if I don't make a list I buy too many things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'make a wrist' instead of 'make a list' and mixes tenses improperly. 'Didn't make' should be 'don't make' to match the present tense context. Also, 'buy something too many' is incorrect; it should be 'buy too many things' to correctly express quantity with a plural noun.

× I didn't make a list because I don't like to.

✓ I don't make a list because I don't like to.

The question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'don't make' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'didn't make'. Using past tense here is inconsistent with the habitual context.

× Because. Michael List is hard and so tired.

✓ Because making a list is hard and tiring.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Michael List' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'making a list'. The sentence should be a complete thought explaining why some people don't like making lists, using gerund form and proper adjectives.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I make a list on my phone is useful.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is useful.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. The phrase 'I make a list on my phone is useful' is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'because it is useful' referring to making lists on the phone.