List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“making at least an foot shopping”表达不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议你在回答时使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法的正确性。

예시: Sometimes I make a shopping list, but usually I just buy what I need when I go to the store.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“make my work became”应为“make my work become”或“make my work more efficient”。建议你使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me become more efficient and organized in my daily tasks.

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，如“make at least maybe a waste”应为“making a list may be a waste”。建议你简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, and they prefer to do tasks spontaneously or follow emails instead.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“on my”后缺少名词。建议你注意句子完整性，使用正确的词汇，并且表达更自然流畅。

예시: When I was in school, I preferred making lists on paper because phones were not allowed. Now, I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and flexible.

× I think making at least an foot shopping is a little complicated.

✓ I think making at least a foot shopping is a little complicated.

这里的冠词使用错误，'foot'是单数名词，前面应该用不定冠词'a'而不是'an'。因为'an'用于以元音音素开头的单词前。

× I will buy some things which I think is really need for me.

✓ I will buy some things which I think are really needed for me.

'things'是复数，关系代词后面的谓语动词应与先行词一致，使用复数'are'。'need'应为过去分词'needed'作形容词用。

× I think it can help me make my work became more efficient and effective

✓ I think it can help me make my work become more efficient and effective

'became'是过去式，句中应使用动词原形'become'，因为前面有情态动词'can'。

× I prefer to make a table list for my daily life and it make a very great influence for me.

✓ I prefer to make a table list for my daily life and it makes a very great influence on me.

主语'it'是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'。

× it make a very great influence for me.

✓ it makes a very great influence on me.

动词'influence'后应接介词'on'表示对某人产生影响，'for'用法不当。

× they may think make at least maybe a waste of their time

✓ they may think making at least maybe a waste of their time

动词'think'后接动名词作宾语，不能直接接动词原形'make'。

× if they have this list they may not do things follow the list said.

✓ if they have this list they may not do things following what the list says.

动词'do'后应接动名词'following'表示动作的进行，且'list said'表达不完整，应改为'what the list says'。

× So they prefer to do work just on time or through their e-mail.

✓ So they prefer to do work just on time or through their e-mails.

'e-mail'复数形式应为'e-mails'，且此处表达多个邮件更合适。

× when I was a primary school student or a junior high school student, I prefer to make lists on paper because we don't allow to take our phones to school.

✓ when I was a primary school student or a junior high school student, I preferred to make lists on paper because we weren't allowed to take our phones to school.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时，'prefer'改为'preferred'，'don't allow'改为'weren't allowed'。

× But in this time I prefer to make a list on my because I think it can be more flexible for me to chat.

✓ But now I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is more flexible for me to use.

'in this time'表达不自然，应改为'now'；'on my'后缺少名词'phone'；'to chat'与上下文不符，应改为更通用的'to use'。