List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata 'really' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. It reminds me of the items I need to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary things.

제안: Perbaiki kelancaran kalimat dan hindari pengulangan kata 'really'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih koheren dan lengkap untuk menjelaskan manfaat membuat daftar kerja.

예시: Yes, I make a daily work list because it helps me stay organized and focused. It also reminds me of the tasks I need to complete each day.

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami. Gunakan kata yang tepat seperti 'lists' dan tambahkan alasan yang lebih spesifik.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously, which makes their activities more exciting and less monotonous.

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan kata yang salah seperti 'clips' dan kalimat yang tidak jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas untuk menjelaskan preferensi membuat daftar.

예시: It depends on my mood, but I usually make lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry everywhere. Sometimes, I write lists on paper and stick them on my wall for easy reference.

× I really like using lists when I shop because it really manages.

✓ I really like using lists when I shop because they really help me manage.

The original sentence uses 'manages' incorrectly as a verb without a clear subject. The phrase 'it really manages' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies that 'lists' (plural) help the speaker manage, using the verb 'help' followed by the base verb 'manage'. This fits the intended meaning and corrects the verb usage.

× It really helps managing my mind and it can remind me what things I should buy and what things to avoid buying when I don't really need it.

✓ It really helps me manage my mind and can remind me what things I should buy and what things to avoid buying when I don't really need them.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the gerund. Therefore, 'helps managing' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me manage'. Also, 'what things to avoid buying when I don't really need it' has a pronoun agreement issue; 'things' is plural, so 'it' should be 'them'.

× It really it also helps me. Remembering things that I should be doing that day.

✓ It also really helps me remember things that I should be doing that day.

The original sentence is fragmented and has an unnecessary repetition of 'it'. The phrase 'helps me. Remembering' is incorrect; 'helps me' should be followed by the base verb 'remember'. The correction combines the ideas into a single coherent sentence.

× I think some people don't like making this because they prefer to do things spontaneously.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what is being referred to.

× Spontaneous things might make them more exciting and probably less boring for them.

✓ Spontaneous things might make their activities more exciting and probably less boring for them.

The original sentence is vague and awkward. 'Spontaneous things' is unclear; specifying 'their activities' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'more exciting and probably less boring for them' is acceptable but improved by specifying what is affected.

× It really depends on my mood, but I mainly make clips on my phone because it's easier to look at since I bring my phone anywhere I go.

✓ It really depends on my mood, but I mainly make lists on my phone because it's easier to look at since I bring my phone everywhere I go.

The word 'clips' is likely a mistake for 'lists'. Also, the phrase 'bring my phone anywhere I go' is better expressed as 'bring my phone everywhere I go' for natural English usage.

× But occasionally I make lists on paper too, especially when I want to see the list on my wall sticking so I write it on the opposite.

✓ But occasionally I make lists on paper too, especially when I want to see the list sticking on my wall, so I write it on paper.

The phrase 'see the list on my wall sticking' is awkward; 'list sticking on my wall' is more natural. 'I write it on the opposite' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I write it on paper' to clarify the meaning.