List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some language inaccuracies and slight redundancy. Try to avoid awkward phrases like 'draw down a few it to avoid' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it tedious, almost like doing homework. Shopping is a relaxed activity for me, so I prefer to browse freely without a strict plan. However, if I need to buy many items, I sometimes make a short list to stay organised.

제안: Your answer is relevant and structured, but there are some grammatical errors such as 'make list' instead of 'making a list'. Also, the example could be more specific. Try to use linking words to improve coherence and provide clearer examples.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I study because making a list helps me save time by clearly organising what I need to do next. For example, it allows me to focus on one task at a time, which increases my productivity and prevents me from feeling overwhelmed.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear and incorrect word choices such as 'making this' instead of 'making lists' and 'wretched' which is inappropriate here. Try to use accurate vocabulary and explain your ideas more clearly with appropriate linking words.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer a more relaxed and spontaneous lifestyle. They may feel that making lists is too strict or compulsory, which can make them feel pressured rather than motivated.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains a confusing phrase 'focus on folks better' which seems incorrect. Try to use precise vocabulary and avoid vague expressions. Also, you could add a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me focus better. When I use my phone, I often get distracted by notifications from games or other apps. Therefore, writing things down on paper feels more organised and less distracting.

× However, sometimes if I need to buy many things, I might draw down a few it to avoid.

✓ However, sometimes if I need to buy many things, I might write down a few to avoid forgetting them.

The sentence incorrectly uses the pronoun 'it' which does not refer clearly to any noun. Also, the phrase 'draw down' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'write down'. The pronoun should be omitted or replaced with a clear reference. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I study because I find that make list helps me save time by clearly organizing what I need to do next.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I study because I find that making a list helps me save time by clearly organizing what I need to do next.

The phrase 'make list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list' to function as a gerund phrase acting as the subject of the clause. This correction ensures proper verb form and article usage, improving grammatical accuracy.

× I think some people don't like making this because they prefer a more relaxed and spontaneous lifestyle.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer a more relaxed and spontaneous lifestyle.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'. It should be replaced with the plural noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what is being referred to. This correction clarifies the meaning and improves grammatical correctness.

× They may feel that making this is too wretched or compulsory, which can make them feel pursued rather than motivated.

✓ They may feel that making lists is too tedious or compulsory, which can make them feel pressured rather than motivated.

The adjective 'wretched' is inappropriate in this context; 'tedious' better conveys the intended meaning of something boring or tiresome. Also, 'pursued' is incorrect; the correct word is 'pressured' to express feeling forced. These corrections improve word choice and sentence clarity.

× I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me focus on folks better.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me focus better.

The phrase 'focus on folks' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'focus better' or 'focus more effectively'. Removing 'on folks' corrects the sentence and improves clarity.