List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. Try to be more direct and concise, avoiding filler words and redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. So, I just buy things as I notice they are running low at home.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helped you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I used to make lists during junior high school to organise my spare time. This method was very helpful because it allowed me to study more effectively.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike lists, and avoid unrelated or unclear comments. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming. However, I think lists can be useful if you only include important tasks.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly which method you prefer and explain why, using clear sentences and linking words. Avoid irrelevant information.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because phones were not allowed in my school in China. However, during my free time, I use my phone to make lists since it is more convenient.

× When I go shopping I usually like look at the things that I I have least in my heart, not on the paper.

✓ When I go shopping I usually like looking at the things that I have least in my heart, not on the paper.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'looking' to indicate a habitual action. Using 'like look' is incorrect because 'like' as a verb is followed by a gerund when expressing preference.

× I usually like look at the things that I I have least in my heart, not on the paper.

✓ I usually like looking at the things that I have least in my heart, not on the paper.

The phrase 'things that I I have least' contains a repeated 'I' which is a typographical error and should be removed for clarity. Also, 'things' is plural and correctly used here.

× I do a list for what I'm going to do during the spare time and it's likely to be a a very convenient and very helpful method to help me to study.

✓ I make a list of what I'm going to do during my spare time and it's likely to be a very convenient and very helpful method to help me study.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'during the spare time' should be 'during my spare time' to specify the time. The repeated 'a a' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'a'.

× Yes, I think during my junior high school time I do a list for what I'm going to do during the spare time and it's likely to be a a very convenient and very helpful method to help me to study.

✓ Yes, I think during my junior high school time I made a list of what I was going to do during my spare time and it was a very convenient and very helpful method to help me study.

Since the time referred to is in the past ('junior high school time'), the verbs should be in the past tense: 'do' should be 'made', 'I'm going to do' should be 'I was going to do', and 'it's' should be 'it was' to maintain tense consistency.

× Maybe I will take it sometimes too as my teacher told me that making to make a list.

✓ Maybe I will do it sometimes too as my teacher told me to make a list.

The phrase 'take it' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'do it' referring to making a list. Also, 'making to make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'told me to make a list' to express instruction.

× But I think he's singer. He's saying that wrongly as we don't need to take everything on the list.

✓ But I think he's wrong. He's saying that incorrectly as we don't need to take everything on the list.

The word 'singer' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'wrong'. Also, 'saying that wrongly' should be 'saying that incorrectly' for proper adverb usage. 'Take everything on the list' is acceptable but could be improved to 'follow everything on the list' for clarity.

× Usually during my junior high school time, I usually will take on note rather than on phone as phone in China.

✓ Usually during my junior high school time, I usually took notes rather than used my phone as phones in China

The phrase 'take on note' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take notes'. Also, 'rather than on phone' should be 'rather than use my phone'. The sentence is incomplete and needs further correction for clarity.

× China is not allowed to go to school and but during my leisure time I will take take a list on the phone to likely to be more.

✓ Phones are not allowed in schools in China, but during my leisure time I will make a list on the phone as it is more convenient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'China is not allowed to go to school' is incorrect; the intended meaning is that phones are not allowed in schools in China. The phrase 'take take a list on the phone to likely to be more' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.